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Out with the old, in with the new

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axxuy

axxuy #1 · May 2nd, 2019 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

So you think you can just do this to me, huh?

tryingmybest1111

tryingmybest1111 #2 · May 2nd, 2019 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

9600720

*claps hands together*

had to do it to em

AquilaVisus

AquilaVisus #3 · May 2nd, 2019 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

Is this really complete? It feels like there is still so much to be said. I sense a jealousy tale here ....

For a one-shot clopfic, the build-up to sex ratio is unusually high (about 4:1, not enough fucking!). It also suffers from some questionable punctuation. But that aside, it is well written.

Keep trying your best!

MisterEdd