"DO IT INSIDE PLEASE, IT'S GOOD FOR THE BABY, YEEEEEESSSSSSS"

This is probably the greatest line ever written in the history of literature. Bravo.

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Lol thanks

that art cover is a joke... at least do it properly and its pita samas art

9596467
I tried to have it in the pic correctly, but for some reason it was being very stupid I'll try to make it work next time, but no promises

I have now read this story and I have to say that I liked it. The only problem I have is that Rarity yells way to much. She's usually pretty composed unless she looses her temper and even then she doesn't always yell that much. Please respond to this comment.

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Yeah, I kind of see what you mean, technically the reason she was yelling near the beginning of the story, because she was fed up with the rumors of her, and Spike. Though, at least for the other part's that might be mistaken as clop part's I eventually got better with those.