Aero, a pegasus pony from Cloudsdale has just learn where his life long love, Rainbow Dash, is. He set's out on his journey to convince her that he is one pony for her. Along the way he may just learn something about himself.
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Really good but all names even sir names have capitals
*slow claps* Bravo, Bravo.
You still need to capitalize every name's first letter, but it's quite good, i can say!
Also, it seems that this is the first romance story with Dashie in it that doesn't end that she's lesbian.
I'm not sure... It seems a bit rushed, don't you think?
1050850
Agreed,
He and Twilight just met and after mere minutes he tells her his love-story all out?
The meeting with AJ was realistic but it really seems a bit rushed...
I withhold my vote until further chapters.
1050957 Trust me, I know all about rushed stuff, I rushed the prologue for my fiction, so I could get to writing the main story.
Never again...
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I don't know. It might be a good story, but I'll never know. I'm not gonna read it because there's some six mistakes in the synopsis alone. It just looks... sloppy.
i don`t care if its rushed i still love a good love story with dashie not being a lesbian...anyways great story.
Sorry about the errors guys. Thank you all for your criticism, I will take it all in for the next time I write a story.
I liked it. It was just...rushed. I like your concept, and I think you have the potential to be an amazing writer, I can see it. So I'm gonna follow.
Advice though, just take your time.
1052631 I will next time, there is always room to improve, and I will try harder next time to do so. Thank you for you criticism.
Rushed much?
This needs to have more likes!
Great job, seems you have a potential to be a great writer. Touching and sweet story, but could be easily about 20% longer. But it was still awesome!
Just... next time remember to capitalize names and city names, it hurts eyes :)
Following!
1068544 I'm glad you liked the story.
Honestly at this point (which is the story of anything I've made in the past) I'm kinda tired of this. It doesn't help that on the second day of writing this I finished at 4 am and wanted to get it out immediately.
I think I'm gonna write a new fanfic soon, I'll try to pace my self out and now get it done at all hours of the morning. I'll try to make a story better than this one.
Thank you for following.
I really laughed when he said Rainbow was obtuse in the first paragraph, it just brought funny thoughts of my friends into my head.
Rainbow was REALLY into being with Aero, it was kinda funny, like, no convincing required...ahh Rainbow, you so silly.
Anyways, it had a D'awww moment or two. Enjoyed, liked, will keep an eye out for other interesting work.