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Pinkie Pie is scared because Maud Pie has Petraphobia, that is unlike the rock worship pony. Hey, guess what? Applejack hates apples now, and Twilight the princess of friendship doesn't like friendship? What kind of hell has Pinkie gotten herself into? Rocks are harmed in this story, you are warned.
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A story involving rock abuse? You psychotic monster! How is this not marked 'mature'?
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yes i know, heartbreaking.
Fun. I like the premise. Having Pinkie be the grounding element in a chaotic situation is a fun twist.
A couple parts did read a bit strangely. My advice would be, if you're not doing it already, to do multiple drafts. It's hard to tell how things will feel for the reader while writing something, but reading it back afterwards and making changes as you see fit can help clear up a lot of that. I personally reread things I write once to check for story flow and sentence structure and such, and then a second time looking only for spelling and grammatical errors. A little thoroughness goes a long way.
I did like the story though! There's definitely somethin there. A willingness to get these ideas for short and sweet stories, and then follow through on those ideas, is a really good skill to have.
Is Fluttershy an animal abuser now too? Or wait no worse she works with PETA
Boulder... NUUUUUUUUU!!!!!
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trust me, it really only was to get a little humor out of my system, i'm not all into mlp anymore. i just had a fun conversation with friends, and then this happened, haha. thank you for your advice though! i usually do, but i didn't take this story too seriously. again, thank you.
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r.i.p boulder.
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wow, who knows? probably not an animal abuser, but hoo, wonder if she just doesn't like animals in this scenario or something.