Your foster brother, Button Mash, has just made a bad brotherly relationship worse by fucking your girl, and on your bed! Looks like the only way to get even is to level up, namely by banging his mom.
Ayyyy, I approve of this chapter, 100% fam, nicely written.
Hmm... well, honestly, methinks we all know where this is gonna go, but Lyra raises a good point, be the bigger guy. Alas, I like me some sweet revenge.
You know, I was expecting this to be just another porn with plot story, but so far I'm seeing a pretty good amount of work put into the story part of it. Consider me impressed, and eagerly waiting for more.
You know, I was expecting this to be just another porn with plot story, but so far I'm seeing a pretty good amount of work put into the story part of it.
That's... that's what porn with plot stories are, though.
If this story actually goes with Lyra and doesn’t do what it’s saying it will, I’d like that quite a bit. It would change things and make for an interesting story with actual character growth. I’ll read it regardless, but it would make it a unique story.
You know, I've always had a knack for figuring out how loose a girl's vagina was based entirely off how they speak and what they think. Lyra here, given her discouragement from getting back at Button, has taken at least half a mile of cock total. And that's BEFORE we take into account the implication of having other guys over!
"Ever the sick maimed mirror aren't you? What can possibly be funny about this Cycelius?"
"The fact that this bastard will inadvertantly screw up, or even better, the undeniable fact that his brother will screw Lyra? Or perhaps the obvious inclinations to Lyra's more...... 'Tenacious' attributes under the veil of night, or perhaps the fact that the very last line of this chapter forbode a storm akin to your 'Ice Age'?"
I love what you've done with Lyra here. Maybe you could actually write a story about her, that apartment and her life afterwards when you're done with this? I'm not normally a fan of Lyra, but this is a light I haven't seen her in, and I am intrigued.
Wow, this is firing on all cylinders right out of the gate. I agree with Lyra. Doing it out of revenge isn't a good idea. Cream Heart doesn't deserve that. Great job so far Disguise. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
TAKE ME HOME, TO THE PLACE I BELONG, WEST VIRGINIA MOUNTAIN MAMMA,TAKE ME HOME COUNTRY ROADS (The siging continues in the distance)
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I love John Denver! Also, this was an excellent chapter!
Ayyyy, I approve of this chapter, 100% fam, nicely written.
Hmm... well, honestly, methinks we all know where this is gonna go, but Lyra raises a good point, be the bigger guy. Alas, I like me some sweet revenge.
Good show, Intricate, good show.
Que imminent shitstorm
Yep, he's going to fuck it up isn't he?
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Everyone loves him, hes a legend
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Most people today don't :(
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Would you, if you were in his position?
If my brother did that to me, I would go to great lengths to get revenge on that little shit and my cheating girlfriend as well.
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Jesus, someones horny
Oh god now im torn i want him t keep this going with lyra but i also want himt get revenge and fuck his mom
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Also mother fucking. Mother fucking is also good.
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In Public I would loudly and clearly make a scene and let out all the details. Public humiliation does wonders for ruining reputations.
You know, I was expecting this to be just another porn with plot story, but so far I'm seeing a pretty good amount of work put into the story part of it. Consider me impressed, and eagerly waiting for more.
Nice
9534711 I agree.
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It's a popular song in the Western Isles.
And the character meets Sweetie Belle leaving the house with her clothes as he's coming in, doesn't he?
if you do end up going where i think you're going with this story atleast include lyra as an altarnate ending
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That's... that's what porn with plot stories are, though.
If this story actually goes with Lyra and doesn’t do what it’s saying it will, I’d like that quite a bit. It would change things and make for an interesting story with actual character growth. I’ll read it regardless, but it would make it a unique story.
You know, I've always had a knack for figuring out how loose a girl's vagina was based entirely off how they speak and what they think. Lyra here, given her discouragement from getting back at Button, has taken at least half a mile of cock total. And that's BEFORE we take into account the implication of having other guys over!
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Aghh! What evil have you spawned in my head?!
*Slumps across desk.*
I did the same thing out of curiosity...
"Funny, isn't it Cocytus?"
"Ever the sick maimed mirror aren't you? What can possibly be funny about this Cycelius?"
"The fact that this bastard will inadvertantly screw up, or even better, the undeniable fact that his brother will screw Lyra? Or perhaps the obvious inclinations to Lyra's more...... 'Tenacious' attributes under the veil of night, or perhaps the fact that the very last line of this chapter forbode a storm akin to your 'Ice Age'?"
"....... eh, perhaps brother, perhaps."
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Guess we can't ignore his girth anymore.
Loving the story, keep the momentum going! I can't wait to see the next chapter.
I love what you've done with Lyra here. Maybe you could actually write a story about her, that apartment and her life afterwards when you're done with this? I'm not normally a fan of Lyra, but this is a light I haven't seen her in, and I am intrigued.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
No, take your revenge!
But at the same time yes, live a happy life and get with Lyra. God this story makes me feel things.
Heard about your meds issue. Hope you're feeling better.
Wow, this is firing on all cylinders right out of the gate. I agree with Lyra. Doing it out of revenge isn't a good idea. Cream Heart doesn't deserve that. Great job so far Disguise. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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1974104 on the derp.
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Next chapter out in two days, be ready!
Why the fuck you lyin' lol, jk
Well, i wasn’t expecting the story to take this turn, but that certainly isn’t a bad thing. Interested to see where this goes
I’d take Lyra over Sweetie Belle any day.
The greatest revenge would be getting with Lyra and being happy.
If Sweetie was willing to do Button then she wasn't worth dating.