Octavia seems to have everything. A mare who she loves to pieces, a nice apartment in Canterlot, regular concerts for her to ply her craft, not to mention Vinyl helping her enjoy Canterlot's night-life. However, not everything is perfect. Beyond the, by comparison, mundane concerns of hiding their relationship from everyone, baring those closest to them, Octavia's dark secrets and darker past threaten to rear their heads at every corner, and her continued relationship with Vinyl puts the DJ at constant risk
Well, here's my first MLP fanfic. I have written fanfics before, but this is my first crack at ponies. I apologise beforehand for poor writing, and hope you enjoy it regardless. I am open to constructive criticism, so please, if you feel I need to improve in any areas, let me know
EDIT: The story know has a very different dynamic, due to initial similarities with other stories on this site, as well as a need to slow the story down. The plot, however, will remain very much the same, but with reversed character roles
Can't wait to see where this goes. Like, follow and a moustache for you.
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Thank you very much for all three. I shall wear the moustache with pride
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And you deserve all three, I will patiently await further chapters.
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I'm going to begin working on Chapter 2 tomorrow if all goes well
Was the last chapter actually altered like it says because I re-read it and didn't notice any changes.
Either way another good chapter, I trully cannot wait to see where this goes and who is going to be what.
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The original first chapter had the pair attacked by a werewolf. If you didn't read that, then you read the updated version
And thanks
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Then I guess that I must have read the updated one then.
Also you're welcome, the story is good so far and I have no idea as to why this has so many thumbs down.
I hope this gets featured sometime soon.
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Most of the thumbs came from the original first Chapter, which sucked
Thanks
NOOOOOOOOOOOO VINYL!
Vinyl! You can't be turned, not before the akward "Oh yeah I'm kinda a wearpony," talk at least.
This is a great story i cant wait to find out how it all ends
MOAR MUST HAVE MOAR
but anyway awesome story
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Thank you very much, it's always nice to hear that people enjoy my writing. As for more coming out, rest assured there will be further chapters, though I cannot promise a deadline
Poor Trixie
Story's getting interesting. Can't wait to see were this goes.
~ Timid
NO! Vinyl please tell me you're alright my love! Don't let yourself sucumb to the vamprism!
~ Scare
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Thanks, and we'll just have to see
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Don't hurt my beloved!
~ Scare
Don't mind him I have him contained.
~ Timid
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Maybe
If you're sure
And Scare, don't worry, everything will be fine
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Fine. I will believe you for now. But if she is drastically hurt I will find you.
~ Scare
I would probably run far if I were you.
~ Timid
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Will do
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It is okay now he fell asleep. We still like the story though.
~ Timid
I hope swift streak is rotting in hell
but love the story and i hope u update again soon
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Thank you, and I think you will be content with Swift Streak's fate. Hope you enjoy the future chapters
Well I don't like Trixie but you made actually likable. Good job!
~ Timid
Vinyl had better be okay... we don't need a repeat of last time.
~ Scare
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Thank you, and you'd probably best get the chains ready
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I'll make sure he's mentally ready for the next chapter.
~ Timid
Ready? For what?
NOOOO!
~ Scare
hope mores out soon but schools a beech aint it
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Yep
NOOO! Not before the awkward talk! But at least Vinyl seems okay. That you are okay... For now.
~ Scare
Well that was a pretty good chapter. Nice and short and got the needed info out there without incident.
~ Timid
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Thanks
so. when do you think the next chapter will be out?
I like this story, it's actually well written, and I like these vampire/werewolf stories. good job man.
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I can't guarantee a precise time at present, as most of my time is taken up with exam preparations and a school play. Thank you for the compliment
1977542 Potentially....
So any hope for a update anytime. I have a set amount of time between hiatus and the last update. If there's no update 95% don't come back. But I really want this stOry too.
2514366 I'm sorry, I'm having difficulty figuring out what you mean. If you're asking if there's going to be another update, then for the time being no. I'm waiting on any inspiration for the story before I attempt to post anything, since I don't want to end up putting out half-arsed content
I Really like this and hope you countinue this soon.
Also when Octavia is talking to Vinyl about he negitives I think you meant Can't on both Cans