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Tyl
Just a new writer trying to break through in writing fan fics. I take ideas to new stories.
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I got some that involves Spike with a girl.
Not a bad attempt, I kind of liked it overall. The formatting and flow was a little jarring and if that was cleaned up I would have enjoyed it much more.
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Yeah. The first try is usually the hardest when your not living in a country where english isn't the main language. This is written in present, allseeing and I will try something else next time.
You writing still needs work, but you're getting there. I would have thought Flash being the one accidentally getting pregnant while having sex with in Seapony form.
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If I could ask you. Which of the two halves is the worst?
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Part 2/6 was the section that I struggled to understand the most. The sentences abruptly stop and continue onto the next line which makes it a difficult format to follow.
Why does this exist?
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Easy. Fantasy. It's the whole part about writing. To write down your own fantasies. If that what you meant?