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So long as the main focus is on twilight it dont matter to me. Xd
I agree whit 9741248. As long as the whole "diffrent" univers is keept to short segments at the end or begining of a chapter and dont interfer whit the main story it could make for some intresting paralels.
Maybe an iterim chapter between games could be dvoted to this hevenly burocrosy.
This will be interesting in the long run with how this is handled. Like when and how Twilight gets back home. Keep doing on what your doing with Twilight but think on how this goes on in the grand scheme of things.
Having Twilight in an other universe adds an interesting angle to the story as to why Twilight was sent where she was and how to get her back. I don’t think it impacts the main story in any real way other than the controlling circumstances. Focus on the main story and occasionally throw in snippets as to the how’s and why’s of Twilight’s displacement and how she will get back. How you’re doing the story is fine and I don’t see the the need to change it.
Why does it always has to be another universe?
Have to agree with the others. This could work or be disastrous so be careful.
Also why would Guilty Spark want Twilight alive? She can't survive the halo blast.
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Thanks for the feedback about this subplot. I am intending for it to be a side story, so I'm glad that you guys think this is the best route. Hopefully, you guys like what I have in store for this subplot.
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Just be careful. Right now it is fine but an idea can go horribly wrong.
Heir to Nightmare is case one on this to me.
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I'll try my best. I'm considering allowing some people to view in the future the sub plot sections to see if it works or not, so I don't do something bad or stupid
The discord section seems completely unnecessary.
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If you screw up I will let you know so you can fix it.
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Whoops, I saw Spartan in the comment and blew through the name of who was being referenced. I apologise to whoever I called a troglodyte, heathen, simpleton, or the like.
different universe removes the danger that equestira is in.
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I do realise that the threat from the immediate threat from Halo is no more. But I do have something to replace that that is VERY closely related
So far this fic has been mostly the chief saving twilight's ass and her being stupidly underpowered and getting in the way. Seriously dude, she wasn't nearly this bad at thinking on her feet (hooves?) in the show. Please make her better because it is seriously painful to read about her being so terrible
9743844 The author is hitting the tone of a rookie to combat quite nicely, you would be surprised how stupid people become once put under combat stress
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It makes perfect sense, I essentially binge read the story so I kind of got progressively more pissed off at how pathetic twilight was until I commented that. Also, I think the author nerfed master chief a tiny bit
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I agree on the master Chief being a little nerfed but then again he is part of the navy so maybe not nerfed
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I mean nerfed compared to the video games although I don't think I have ever played the halo games on anything more difficult than easy so I might be wrong. But didn't the hunter(s) get through chief's armor a little fast with their shield bashing and such? Because I remember that doing a lot less damage in the games than it did in this story
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If you paid attention during Truth and Reconciliation, you'll notice that he's on easy mode, too. The 2 jackals behind the large door are usually hunters in the other difficulties.
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I use for reference both the game and the novelisation of the CE, Halo: the Flood. In the Truth and Reconciliation section of the book, the jackals are specifically mentioned as the ones coming through the door. Many of the actions for the Chief I've written down are based on the book
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I was making a joke about how the navy sucks and not a mention to the games or books
9745514 was making a joke about the navy
Well Twilight you gotten what you wanted lol.
Heard?
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Ahh that makes sense. The author of that book had played the game in easy mode so based the story in that, such as finding all the shotguns that are not there in higher difficulties.
That got a good chuckle
Completely forgot about whatever 'higher power' arc Discord is involved in. Wonder what'll happen.
cant wait for more
I think it would be better for it to in the same universe because it would make more sense for the forerunner ancient ruins being on Equestria like on the other alien worlds and earth
I've been reading this from start to current and i'm enjoying it. There are some miss used or wrong words here and there but its nothing that i can't see what was meant. Though from the start you spelt Centre with "tre" but in the last chapter that changed to the american spelling of "Center"
Oh thank god I found this story again
I thought it had been deleted... Thank god that I was wrong
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any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
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Currently working on the chapter now. Uni has been quite prevalent so far for me, so writing has stalled a bit, but I'm making an effort to continue onwards now.
My heart is crying out for more.
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All I can say is soon
Ah thank fuck. No potential Flood threat on Equis