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Great story so far. I hope for more soon.
great story I hope the next chapter
There will be a romance between Twilight and Jhon
This well-crafted action sequence, from bridge to lifeboat, is even more exciting than the one scripted for the actual game.
Twilights always been a fast learner. That’s both going to serve her well and horrify her with how easy it gets.
Pacing is pretty solid, and I feel as though Twilight's adaptive ability is realistic in this scenario, no matter how much it may horrify her. Had the Covenant not have been so ready to kill, I'm sure Twilight would be more confused and hesitant, but many of the actions she's committed so far aligns with the majority of her ideals, aside from the actual killing part. Though it isn't the only reason, she's defending those who she believes have done nothing wrong (which is correct in this scenario), so she's seemingly able to force herself to temporarily ignore her moral qualms and defend herself and the fellow humans.
Can't wait for more!
Yeah, while losing it in a battlefield is bad, bottling it up forever is just as bad.
The trick is to know the time and place to mourn, which I'd hazard is easier said than done.
While I like the story, something bothers me lore wise.
No. Just... No.
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Keyword being could which means the possibility is there not that is there.
It’s not new, ponies are commonly shown to have that ability in the show.
Cortana assumes Twilight knows what a crossbow is but not a gun?
But she couldn't remember back at the Forerunner structure? Maybe add something in that chapter that prevents the use of teleportation. Either some confusion by Twilight that her magic doesn't work or she is incapacitated somehow.
I never got why in these stories twilight gets a gun I mean she has a horn than can act as a minigun when the tail is cranked, I never saw the need to give a unicron a gun
Really wish the end of the chapter was a mash-up of the ending cutscene of the first level (where the marine shouts "The Autumn! She's been hit!") and the final chapter of TPoA in Halo: The Flood.
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Because ponies with guns are cool.
I notice you make the common mistake of confusing humanities and "humanity's". Humanities is the study of language, culture, and history while "humanity's" is used to describe something that humanity(Us as a whole) have done.
The "pearing" should be "peering" instead.
I can make more edits and proofreads but it's late where I'm at so I can't do much further.
Stupid Grunts they got themselves blown to kingdom come.