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9519942
Right now
I really enjoyed that chapter lots of good action in it. I like how creative is with her fighting style. She could just blast and smash her way through the ring with impunity, but she uses her magic in a bunch of creative and deadly ways. I’m sure she’s fascinated by the learning experience and horrified about how easy it is.
Though I am a bit disappointed about there not being a few more conversations during the chapter. Character interaction is always the best part.
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I'm glad that you enjoyed it. It took a lot of my time and energy to write it, so it is really great that you love it.
I will try to address that a bit later in the story, though not just yet.
Don't worry. I'm making an effort to have the next chapter be full of interactions between the Chief and Twilight. That is, when they're not running away from the Flood
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This is the time that twilight really really needs a EVA suit of some kind. Maybe a class 1 combat skin or something? If not she’s really screwed in the later parts of the infection.
I'll be honest, I forgot that there was a door that takes you down to the canyon if you don't grab a banshee on the bridge. I just have never not stolen one of those banshee's.
loved that you are keeping to the lore of the humans, especially the chief, not using covenant weapons unless they have to.
wonder what you'll come up with to protect twilight from the flood infection. or maybe you wont.
also, I hope twilight either brings the panicking marine to his senses, or she gets shot by him and chief gets uber protective of her.
Loved this chapter. can't wait to see what happens next.
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Maybe, maybe not
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Glad you've enjoyed the chapter. I won't say much about what will happen with the Flood now, but you may find it interesting.
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cant wait!
Just binged this and I gotta say, I’m loving it so far. I can’t wait to see how Twilight will react to the horror that is the Flood. Chief’s dialogue doesn’t seem OOC at all and I’m enjoying every sungle bit of this. I can’t help loving Halo, especially now that I know it’s coming to PC! Hoorah!
Just as well, for a first time fic, I’ve gotta say, you’re doing fantastic. My one criticism so far is that a lot of the description you put down is somewhat repetitive and mechanical. I feel a lot more life could be given with just a little more variation in vocabulary and sentence structure. Of course, I may just be spouting a bunch of codswallop, but I did it a lot when I first started writing too.
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Thank you very much. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Don't worry about what you are saying; I feel as ell that my descriptive language is not very fluid, but I do think I'm slightly improving each time I post a chapter.
As an alicorn twilight has very strong magic, as well enhanced healing and metabolize. Dose that mean if the flood git her, her body is strong enough between its biology and magic to beat it and become immune? To develop an antibody for the infections ]parasite? In a lot of fanfiction's and general lore magic is shown to be semi sapient. Acting on its own to kill others or save its host if both are strong enough.
So basically the end will be the same as Helljumpers except without Scootaloo.
I completely missed this chapter due to being on base I can't wait for Twilight to see the horrors of the flood!
I think you meant meters instead of minutes
Also, you seem to be using:
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If you want you can use my Contact Harvest dividers.
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Thank you for finding that mistake, Completely overlooked it. As for the dividers, I would love to use them for the perspective change, if that is all right with you. How did you make them, if you don't mind me asking?
I'm glad you're looking forward to the next chapter. I hope that you'll enjoy it when it comes out
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I'm still deciding what to do with the ending. Due to the rate of publishing chapters for me, I may wait till Halo Infinite comes out to decide th ending, as I do not like where Halo 5 took the story, and I want to see how Infinite ends that arch
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They're just a couple of vectors combined with a central image thrown together in photoshop, it's pretty low effort to make them on my part so feel free to use them.
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Fair enough... Lets just hope the Flood returns in Infinite.
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Preach
maybe not a good idea joking with the all-mighty pony that could rip you in half if she wanted to.
also is it bad that I kinda want to see a slight romance between the chief and twilight?
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what do you mean "there will be"?
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I think he/she is predicting that the Chief and Twilight will have a romance. At the moment, I don't have any plans for that right now.
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what I meant was that was a pretty bold statement.
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also you say you may have a very inexperience type of writing but its one of the best writing from a fanfic I have seen.
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Thank you. What I meant by inexperienced writing is that I thought that my writing style was not at par with most writers on this site, and that I would be making quite a lot of grammatical and structural mistakes for the fanfic. Glad to hear that people think otherwise.
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Not likely the Flood had always had a way to infected their host, especially when the Gravemind is involved.
It's great how this works. Try defending yourself against one enemy and you fall to another.
Let's just hope our protagonists don't end up doing the same.
Heck yeah that was awesome!
That's... a good point of view.
I wonder how I haven't thought of it before.
oof
Is it...
Is it the start of what I think it is?
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Actually, Johnson is immune as a result of the Spartan-I program.
9678624
The chief is a Spartan II you uncultured swine.
... No offense.
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No, Sgt. Johnson isn't a Spartan II. He was a part of the Spartan I program, which gave him the augmentations he has and "Boren's Syndrome" (though whether that actually exists or not is up for debate), and what stopped the Flood from infecting him. You're thinking of John, the Master Chief.
Halo: Forward Unto Dawn reference. Awesome!
The Flood....
The giggles.
What is with aliens stealing our shiny shit? That’s ours, hooves/claws/tentacles off!
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Yep it's going to be some tough shit for twilight to handle good thing master chief is their.
son los flood la antigua amenaza
I got a feeling what's coming next! The parasite!