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Kill? Unlikely. Magic kindergarten? Most definitely
Twilight is just the kind of person Cortana loves. A walking exposition dump. She loves all the new bitty goods of info.
If this is your first story then you are AWESOME in how well done it is!
Don't worry – or rather, do worry – you were probably mind-controlled. Or at least, in a trance close enough to mind control.
Don't forget that the structure did a 'mental scan' after all. With such powers, and the description of the 'urge' in Twilight before she touched the console, it's not out of the question.
Sounds cold-hearted, but it's admittedly understandable in a pragmatic way.
At least they didn't throw diplomatic options right out the window.
Oh you poor innocent bookworm.
I think you went way too quickly between Twilight arriving on the ship, and her crying about not getting home. Twilight is an big optimist, so her thinking she can't get back isn't going to happen right off the bat. Either she needs someone else to repeatedly tell her that, or she has to spend a lot of time eliminating other options before failure seems most likely to her.
Supprised that nobody reacted to her being a princess. Yet.
I like those little icons you use for POV changes.
Why would a Forerunner facility transport anything to a human vessel in Slipspace? It would make more sense for Twilight to arrive on the ring for some purpose.
There's a contradiction in your story.
You say that twilight related humans with her friends from canterlot high, but then shortly after you said that she said that humans were a myth.
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Well, in her universe they are, the world beyond the mirror is an alternate universe
My head:
Wait jackals are female