When you are given a second chance do you waste that opportunity?
Or do you take advantage of this second lease at live?
Rose Everet did the latter.
Join her on her journey in a dimension, that is being exposed to magic.
And witness her efforts to controll it.
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It was okay however I think it’d be best if you went through and corrected many mistakes that you find though I didn’t find many
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Thanks for the feedback. I will try to find any mistakes that I have made.
Sorry if they annoyed you but I am not a native english speaker.
Friendly word of advice, what writing out somebody saying something don't do this:
Instead, do this:
Please respond to this comment.
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Thanks for the advice. 👍
I will try to correct that.
9384607
It should be corrected now.
9384656
Are you gonna continue this story?
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Not at the moment.
Very interesting idea. It's sad there is no continuation.
Upd: frozen. Sad.
You got any ideas for a continuation
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I do actually have a second chapter in the works. Don't know when it will be finished though.