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Question: Will there be a "good ending", where everything goes back to the way it was before D-Jinn arrived?
For me, the answer to that question might be a dealbreaker.
And what is this a crossover with?
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The Ending is the ending, my friend, whether its good or bad depends on perspective, but i have a feeling you will like it.
As for what this crosses over with, it crosses over with another work of fiction that i built, but you wont find it anywhere as i never published it. I will say that i built the multiverse of which D-Jinn comes from alongside my brother, and we have spent many years crafting it. This is merely an experiment of sorts.
...I'm very confused as to what this D-Jinn fellow was trying to accomplish here. From the context of the story, he just seems like an arrogant jerk who appears from nowhere and proceeds to argue some sort of... Philosophy from what I can gather. Some explanation as to who he is and why he has these seemingly deific powers would've been nice as well. This character seems like he could be interesting, but the arrogance he displays and the sheer lack of explanation really detracts from anything that could be gleaned.
Edit: His motivation for all this would've been nice to see, beyond him wanting to "Talk". Like, the grander scheme behind this, if one exists.
Second edit: A lot of the of the I's in the story when he's referring to himself need to be capitalized.
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That is the main mystery of this story, trying to figure out what his goal is. I mean, i already know what it is, but the mystery tag is there for a reason. This is only the first chapter, after all.
And thank you for pointing that out, i don't always have time to reread my work as i have a pretty busy schedule, so i am always appreciative of those who can help point out spelling errors or of the like.
............... hmmmmmm................
Fun.