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Acadians6545

Acadians6545 #1 · Dec 5th, 2018 · · · Prologue ·

With the Spirit gone, Equus was left with not but ruin and death.

Naught

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Acadians6545 #2 · Dec 5th, 2018 · 1 · · Chapter 1: Aftermath ·

She pulled herself up to provent herself from succumbing to vertigo. "What? What is it?" asked one of pegasus that was nearby. He had noticed she had looked over the edge, and was curious to see what she saw.

Prevent

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #3 · Dec 5th, 2018 · 1 · · Chapter 1: Aftermath ·

I should warn you, all those tags will turn some people off. Make sure you don't make it too dark, or you get this, followed by this.

Crowborn

Crowborn #4 · Dec 5th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: Aftermath ·

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Thanks, i often don't much time to reread over what i write. I very much appreciate people who can help me correct errors i make.
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I don't think it'll come to that, as i am not simply making things dark just to be dark, which is a turn off even i would ditch a story for. The warning are there simply so people don't freak out when they read something disturbing or of the like.

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Acadians6545 #5 · Dec 5th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: Aftermath ·

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You're welcome man.

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Acadians6545 #6 · Dec 6th, 2018 · · · Chapter 2: Searching ·

As she bawled and wailed, in her mind she prayed and begged the gods above, any gods, any that would listen, she begged and prayed for her to wake up from this awful nightmare. She prayed that she'd wake up and all would be well, the world back to the way it was, and all this blood and death be nothing but a dream.

Would be nothing but a tree.

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Acadians6545 #7 · Dec 6th, 2018 · 1 · · Chapter 2: Searching ·

Awesome chapter can't wait for more.

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Acadians6545 #8 · Dec 12th, 2018 · · · Chapter 3: What Remains ·

Lilly fought back a retort. She wanted to argue with him, but in her heart, she couldn't. In a way he was right, but she still hated it. She hated that this had happened. She hated that they had lost so much. She hated that there was so few of them no. And she hated that it could even be considered a positive thing.

So few of them now

Dark-Aii