She pulled herself up to provent herself from succumbing to vertigo. "What? What is it?" asked one of pegasus that was nearby. He had noticed she had looked over the edge, and was curious to see what she saw.
9331196 Thanks, i often don't much time to reread over what i write. I very much appreciate people who can help me correct errors i make. 9331250 I don't think it'll come to that, as i am not simply making things dark just to be dark, which is a turn off even i would ditch a story for. The warning are there simply so people don't freak out when they read something disturbing or of the like.
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I should warn you, all those tags will turn some people off. Make sure you don't make it too dark, or you get this, followed by this.
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Thanks, i often don't much time to reread over what i write. I very much appreciate people who can help me correct errors i make.
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I don't think it'll come to that, as i am not simply making things dark just to be dark, which is a turn off even i would ditch a story for. The warning are there simply so people don't freak out when they read something disturbing or of the like.
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You're welcome man.