• Published 28th Dec 2018
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Lipstick - Barley Citrus



While Rarity is givingTwilight a makeover, the two of them end up discovering something new and unexpected about one another. They just wish they'd discovered it even sooner.

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Comments ( 17 )

Is it really necessary to link to both the cover art artist's homepage and the page the cover art is on in the synopsis?

9385622
You know, that's a fair point.
For some reason, I never thought about that shit

Not bad, not bad at all. I'm hoping next time Rarity gives Twi a footjob ^^

Are we getting another chapter or was this it because I wish to see how far this will go

9386750
Might not happen in this fic
But stick around, I do have lots of fun stuff in store

9386927
This was only the last chapter of Lipstick.
But sequels are on their way
I'll be releasing continuations to this story every Friday for at least through February I think
Keep up with my blog here for the updates

Wow, I can't help feeling Rarity was a bit of a selfish bitch in this one.

9387501
Yee
But Twi loves that bitch

Oh, the way they act toward one another will progress

9387505
So there will be more? I hope there's more.

9388144
Yes, there is plenty more, I have multiple sequels coming
I will be releasing continuations to this story every Friday for, like, a couple months or something
Keep up with my blog for the updates

9398327
Love the sensuality and Twilight's innocence in it. Naivety is a huge turn on for me.

9398392
I'm happy to hear that
I was hoping those aspects would come across well in the story
I really hope you continue to enjoy it as this story unfolds

9445467
Rarity and her... seductive nature. The art of seduction and attraction without seeming to be slutty or desperate is very hard and you NAILED IT here.

Rarity was hot and elegant. And twilight was adorkable as always which is nice.

As someone who has been writing Rarity more lately this is nice to see! It's this kind of energy i wanna capture for Rarity myself. Also for Adagio cause I'm planning a fic between those two and it's hard to do right cause they are SO similar but Adagio seems more.... aggressive with her tactics and has more body to work with in my opinion

Overall it was just a really good story

9445470
unf
You're saying all the right words to me

9445497
He gives credit where it's due sweetheart

Damn right i do Dagi!

I think it's safe to say, the lesson was a success

Thanks for the fic!

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