Good shipping, good sex. Wonderful!

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Thank you, I really appreciate it.
If anything you liked really stood out to you I'd love to hear it.

👌

Interesting. No explaination on why Twilight has a penis though. I know it can be assumed but still, I thought that would have come up. I also felt that Rarity may have been a little too pushy at times, it kind of felt like Twilight was just so overshelmed she just went along with it at times. Great story though, enjoying it thoroughly.

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Hey, thanks for going into detail here
She was just born with a penis in this case
It's a running theme in a lot of my stories

And yes, Rarity was def being too pushy and forward
And Twi just went along with Rarity's mania
And this time, it happened to start something great

Really liked this! A simple, cosy setup, and then when we get to the err, climax, the sex is perfectly imperfect, just as we might expect with an inexperienced Twilight. Both mares felt properly in-character, too. Nice work!

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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it
And happy to hear what it is you liked about it
There's plenty more in store so stick around

Hell yeah this is the good shit.

A couple minor things like improper words. Shuttering instead of shuddering for example and a smriking instead of smirking. A few others sprinkled in but my memory is too shit.

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Thanks, I'll make the corrections

And I'm glad to hear you really enjoyed it
I'd love to hear what you liked about it if anything stood out

*Slow impressed clap*

Okay. New favorite. This is good. Like...really fucking good!

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Thanks, that means a lot
I'd love to hear what you enjoyed about it?
What made it stand out to you?

I'm sorry, but "clitorus" took me out of it and had me cracking up
Still, great story

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Fuck
Thanks for pointing it out

An excellent job with Futa-Twi’s 1st time! Let’s see what Rarity has plan in ch. 2

“Twilight, have you ever seen another woman’s belle-chose?”

“...A woman’s what?”

“Her muff, dear.”

I found this exchange really funny for some reason