The Battle of the Bands within Canterlot High School didn't go according to plan. The Dazzling's having been defeated, left the school and began seeking a life outside those walls. While they weren't students, it was an operation that could have boded well had they succeeded.
On the move within the large city, the girls needed a new plan. Moving from place to place, seeking jobs and a form of self-living. They needed something new and quick.
Thankfully for the Dazzlings, they managed to find assistance from a stranger that whom, also needed assistance. A new bond and alliance would be forged this day, in hopes of completing a beneficial and mutual agreement in hopes of salvation.
that was beautiful
Interesting story I like it
Think I will follow and see where it goes
(Btw, just as a tip. You can merge some sentences together with a comma, instead of using a new sentence)
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Glad you enjoyed it!
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Yes, thank you. Just trying new approaches to making it easier to read. But thank you!