HEEEEYYYYYYYY... IM A BRONY FOREVER!!!!!!!!!! Pinkie Pie is my fave pony!!!!!!!! DERPPPPPYYYYYYYYYY MUFFFFFFIIINNNNNNNNS WOOP WOOP LOL... bye
A dream, nothing more, or so I thought... one of many dreams of the peaceful, friendly land of Equestria. I have longed to go there since i first saw the show: My Little Pony Friendship is magic. When I woke up, I was in a different world.
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I like the start, although the idea of Derpy carrying about an anvil worries me: who in the hay would have ordered it in the first place?
I do want to see where this goes.
Wait...what? I mean..... What?
*head explodes*
I shall track this! I must know what becomes of you!
A little advice, though. I see it's fairly unedited. If you want, I can edit it for you. Send me the Google Docs link (if that's what you're using) to me at Elijah1129@gmail.com
That was when I woke up, but instead of being in my bed, in my room, in my house, I was in the fictional land of Equestria...
Change that into:
That was when I woke up...
Continue in the next chapter.
That really ruined the flow of the story.
hopefully 'real' life won't be as weird as his dreams :S
want to see where dis goeses
I also see the CMC (Cutie Mark Crusaders), Bon Bon and Lyra, Carrot Top, and Doctor Hooves, yelling.. at a... butterfly?
i loled at this part but i wonder were will this go *WHO EVER MADE THE CUP CAKES VIDEO ON YOUTUBE I AM HUNTING YOU AND WHEN I FIND YOU WILL PAY FOR YOUR CRIMES!*
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Um...........
I don't think im using googledocs
but I would LOVE if u could edit for me!!!!! thx for the feedback! I'll see if theres another way that you can edit for me!
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LOL IM SORRY FOR OVERWHELMING YOU WITH WEIRDNESS :3:3
Lol, random bomb.
i hope he's still dreaming
$20 is she says "UMADBRO?"
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Nope
He woke up when derpy dropped the. Anvil on him
Oops!
I just found two mistakes!
Not gonna change them though to see who can find it first.
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um I don't rly understandLOLWUT
Wierd
this had better not end like most HIE ficts where he was just in a coma because a baseball trophy fell off the shelf and hit him in his head while he was sleeping
or something like that
1152137like your oc! keep it away from me
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THX!