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ok now that the next chapter is published I might take tomorrow of but I might start writing just depends if I have the time or not
also I noticed some mistyped words but when I go into edit it is spelled right but changes once I put it back to reading mode
Keep up the good story. It has me staying up to read it and it all ways get me excited for the next update. So know this story is in my top five list for good story and storyline.
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I say pump one more GOOD chapter out then take a brake but that’s just me. I’m not you nor am I a slave driver… I just read the story.
DDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNN THAT FEMALE DD WAS HOT!!
The story so far is great and the character develupment is good, but you keep having punctuation errors apear every once in a while.
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for some reason there is a glitch like when I went into edit there is a word that was spelled thry but in the edit mode it was spelled they so I think there is a glitch or something somewhere
9205724
no no no you missed the funny dude its
SSSSSMMMMMOOOKKKKIIIINNNNN HOT
its a pun and a reference and you missed it
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all of it
9206347
opps
Good name for her and did I miss something with fluttershy or was that the last chapter
WHELP time to put on my RAASA (racist against all shining armors) outfit and attend the trial *puts on a outfit similar to the KKK outfit except it has shining armor's head being cut off with the words "FUCK SHINING ARMOR" ON THE FRONT AND BACK* I got alot of spares RAASA outfits
9207934
Sign me up!
my next chapter my be kind of long
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*gives you RAASA outfit*
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Thank you, comrade!
my next chapter will be out today
Brew, could you please frigging stop using as as a placeholder for a dot? It's getting annoying when single sentence grows to a size of a paragraph.
And how many diamond bitches are there? For some reason you refer to her "diamond dogs" every time Talion picks her up.
And God bless you with a good proofreader/editor. Do you ever read your own chapters before throwing them at us? Seriously, install Grammarly extension and do at least a basic check for the most common issues or share this stuff on Google docs with right to make annotations. Maybe that will help to fix this trainwreck.
La historia es buena pero necesita una reedición completa, los personajes aveces parecen planos
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I dont think English is his first 2 or 3 language.
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Boi I don't think it's their tenth lol