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this is the first story I have ever written before so give me some credit
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Except you could of did something else instead of following the famous 'follow the mlp script/plot/timeline' that everyone already knows. Trust me, NEVER copy the mlp script even if it is just pieces, it can kill the interest of the reader and you're only cheating yourself as a writer. Try to derail from timeline, try to go an alternative route type of deal where the future is changed by the main character's actions/presence.
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Oh I'm giving you credit alright cause I could not write any sort of good story I would probably make a Gary Stu (mary sue) story.
This, this is awesome and immediately caught my attention
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you have to admit he is easy to make a fool out of
The links don't work
Actually none of the links work
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You have to copy the entire link that includes the http at the start
I am reading EVERYTHING on Talions voice
You need to use more dots.
Whats funny is in the game they are called worriors and defenders I'm shocked you don't know that but you know berserkers and one last thing Just in case you don't know the name of the class of the uruks-hai which throw spears they are called hunters
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He isn't going totally off of the game. I am shocked you didn't realize that. The units he mentioned are animated suits of armour, not living beings.
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Some stories can follow it and do good.
Star Eater is one.
There is zero punctuation in most of your paragraphs.
persian archers!
You have good taste sir