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wtf you said that this story was placed before the main 6 were born!?
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This is not my Story, my other story was published on my account. Here is my Story: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/417917/a-rewritten-past
*says in a thick Chinese accent* Interesting
9183157
*Now
Most of this chapter is just a copy/paste of cannon events, all of which our MC was neither there for nor really effected by. I skipped all but the last two or three paragraphs since I've read these events time and time again.
There's no need to make carbon copies of episodes, we know what happened. Basic rule of thumb I see all the time: These sorts of chapters are only necessary if there is a difference in personality from cannon or if the main character influences or is influenced by events. You could have saved an entire page+ of space and time just by cutting to when the main 6 reach the castle.
It shows RD again... And not flutters
HOLY GEOS ITS RALLEN!!!!
Ugh, please never do this again. It's dead obvious that you didn't like to write this chapter and did want skip this mess as soon as possible. Either pick a different POV (preferably MC) or skip entirely since everyone know what happened in the very first episode of the show.
And yes, where is Flutters? You put RD's pic again there. In fact, were this chapter only necessary to show us these pics and mention Twi's cup size?
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Totalmente de acuerdo, se que tenías que presentar a los personajes pero pudiste hacerlo en el capítulo anterior
The only pic link to what Fluttershy looks like is wrong as you used the Rainbow Dash link again.
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Sorry i wil fix that
9327760
ok i fixed it
I think you have been letting the auto correction on whatever you use to write play around with you too much.
A lot of the pony names don't have a capital first letter
The breast size was a unnecessary detail
broken link
9327831 Hey your link for twilight’s picture is broken.
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I will try to fix it when i have the chance but i am working on like 6 projects at one right now
This is almost as fast as the show when it comes to killing villains and heart.... wait I don't have the second.
Cool thus far but u need to use capitalization
Link don't work
Link for twilight is still broken my dude.
Hello there I know this is a pretty old story and stuff but if you mind for the people who use the narrator program for the stories can you fix the link thing because I like sitting down relaxing and doing some other things while listening to the story and when you hear the link to a website it's kind of annoying if you need help with the stories and stuff try to log on to the Discord server the people there would help you out.
So here's a lovely information for you for future upcoming stories by highlighting a action or a thing that you want to explain or bring a song to a picture can be added in by highlighting the word and hitting the picture icon from there a picture box will show up where you will put the link of that picture and it shows up in the Box it works and then you just press okay or enter it also does the same thing with the link just look for the chain-link icon and then play save link to a website or video for a song or information if you can go back and do this stuff for your story it would help out a lot for bringing people into your story who use the narrator program