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welp.... introducing shining dick.
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hey dude are you gonna have caribou killing in this
I wanted to be a little more original so I changed how a few of the characters act
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maybe I don't know yet I might though
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It's true though... this is way past being protective.
*TEXT TO SPEECH DEVICE STARTS* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! SHINING DICK HE GOT
DEMOTED AH!
WHELP THAT
ASSASSIN IS GONNA GET A NASTY SUPRISE IN FORM OF BRANDING
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IK i'm still laughing at him being demoted
THAT'S WHAT HAPPENS IF YOU DISOBEY YOUR SUPERIORS AND HE JUST GOT OFF EASY
IF THIS WAS A 21 CENTURY HUMAN COUNTRY HE WOULD BE ETHER DISHONORABLY DISCHARGED OR FACE COURT MARITAL
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Indeed, and then there is the pay cut.... can't afford an to expensive ring now can he?
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I was going to kick him out of the royal guard but i changed my mind and demoted him
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I WOULD HAVE LOVE TO SEE HIM GET KICKED OUT
what he did almost treason for going against the princess's commands
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Oh trust me he will get what is coming to him soon enough
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so will you be going with a just a hint of don't get cocky in shining armor being: tribalist, speciesist, and a right zealot arse
Not bad, a little fast in the story's progress. And Talion has no true purpose so far, so its hard to judge if the story got a future or not. But we will see in the future.
O and last chapter had a lot of long "URL" and got pretty hard to read on a mobile device.
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maybe don't get cocky and don't underestimate were my favorite story's before they were removed
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yes the goal of the story will be made clear when twilight becomes a alicorn I can not give to much information though but it does have a goal
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I am not lifeless shining armor… just deathless.
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Yup that’s something I feel Talion would say
I will upload my next chapter tomorrow I wanted to take a break today but I have already started
Also I have a surprise for my next chapter it involves the assassin identity you will be surprised who it is
Well, so far this story is, passable however I would strongly suggest leaving all of the links out of your story or better yet use the link feature to make the links text, so instead of:
It’s
Shining armor dick is hire and the story is going to fast take your time make the story don't go super fast take time making it
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thx for the suggestion I did not know I could do that I will start doing that
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that's just bloody rude
if you don't like fan versions of don't get cocky then
LEAVE!! the author doesn't want your rudeness and your rude behavior
Un incluso con las dificultades sigo leyendo, hay otros peores
I think this is the first fic I’ve read in which the Royal Guard and Shining Armor in particular actually suffered consequences for their stupidity and in which Celestia doesn’t tolerate shit.
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And nearly started a war his country has no chance of winning, is aware of that, and is dumb enough to convince himself that attacking a fortress when badly outnumbered is brilliant, and believes that attacking someone would prevent his nation from being attacked.
and I am going to change POV a few times in the next up coming chapters so you can get the liches perspectives like the 33 chapter
Should be Minas Morgul.
Correction: trialed (the 'I' and the 'a' need to be switched)
A trail is a path, as in: a forest trail is a path through the forest.
A trial is a proceeding determining justice or fairness in matters of law. Such as determining the innocence or guilt of someone accused of murder.
Celestia and Luna are living armors?
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She and Luna are some of the few that remember how to make them
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