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Or, translated into structured English:
Grammarpone, AWAAAAAAAAAY.
I am with Snow on the grammar thing. Either 1, you get an editor; or 2, you learn proper English punctuation; because in almost every chapter, every paragraph is basically a run on sentence. Don't get me wrong, its a great story, but I think it's brought down by the poor grammar. Here's a perfect example of what I mean.
I mean we are not third graders here, are we? This is supposed to be a full paragraph, and yet how many punctuation marks do I see? A whopping 2, one period at the end of the quote, which is not even supposed to be there; verbal quotes with periods at the end are supposed to be changed into commas; and the second period at the very end of the paragraph. What's worse than all of this, is it seems like it is only getting worse as you write.
i will try to have next chapter out tomorrow
my chapter is finished just waiting for editor to give the Ok
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Hey, I know an editor that would be perfect for you.quickmeme.com/img/71/71930e9ea00a94c6a695b59e1441fc3cf451d3ab35a5c22ea74e69eb8b64a395.jpg