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a few misspells but that's fine, but a good idea is to use Grammarly or something like that and then reread the chapter to see if all the spelling is good
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i will look through it and see if i can fix the spelling mistakes
That metal that affect Talión was a good addition to the story, Talien was far too powerful from day one. Also remember that you still have the books of black magic, one thing that is Bothering me is why Talion did not use his army of ghosts , maybe you should explain why he couldn’t or why he wouldn’t
The first paragraph in chap 15 is a single run on sentance.