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A little fast passed, but other wise good.
Nice story, but it need editing and change in pacing. Some parts feel clustered.
hey I was going to do a heat season but I decided to not do that though
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Good choice.
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No wonder. You already made them half in heat 24/7. You'd have to turn at least 3 chapters into nothing but clop to beat that. So, good choice. Nothing against 3+ chapters of clop, but that will stall the story.