A girl who loves nothing but gold. A dragon who kidnaps her by accident. A misunderstanding that's more trouble than it's worth. An opportunity to escape. Just as long as no one tries to rescue her.
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ONE PUNCH!
He's right.
He's right,
You overestimate the army.
Hi Coco.
HAH!
Are you serious?
What?
That's worse.
Oh you are just a treat.
I really shouldn't laugh.
You're more gold obsessed than the DRAGON.
This is gonna be fun.
Man this was a great chapter. OMG Rarity is honestly a pain in the ass. At the moment she is providing nothing to this partnership. I mean I think Spike will grow more and more bothered by her till she see how much of a headache she is being to her savior. I think one thing I really want to see is for her to see how common people live and how her father's rule effects them. Rarity is a brat and knows as much about the world as a orange, even tho she does have a good heart. I want to really see her learn and grow. I think seeing some real depth to Spike would be great as well. We need to see how it is being a dragon, a peaceful dragon at that, in this world has been for him. I bet he has more issues than we know of and that is great place to see Rarity and him bond. I honestly think Spike and Coco will get along alot in this. I mean when she isn't fangirling on Rarity I think she will be able to just sit and talk with Spike very easily. Both of them know how normal life is Rarity doesn't. I think the only thing that will get I the way of them is Rarity honestly. As Coco think highly of her, Spike for good reason does not. That will be the thing to cause any issue between the two lol .
Wow. Rarity has a density rivaling osmium.
Oh Coco. You are going to be one very sad lesbian when you learn the truth.
A great story so far a few spelling errors here and there but otherwise excellent. Keep going keep the update train chugging along the story track !
I was hoping for Spike to dual wield. I was really surprised when Coco liked gold as much as the Platinium Princess. Wait, can they even share partners?
I was expecting surprise felatio. I am happy to say I was wrong.
Darn was hoping they both stayed nude
This is oddly filthy and I find that I want more.
I imagine Rainbow Dash will be one of the adventurers. And that she'll find it all so hilarious that she'll give them her full support
The Princess who's sexually aroused by gold, the seamstress who misunderstood what she said and the peaceful dragon that 'kidnapped' the princess who couldn't wait to see how this goes down.
Spike should really explain to Rarity about 'The Talk.'
You sure about that, he has some pretty sharp teeth
This missunderstanding is more fun than it should be
Wonderful chapter! But I just have one teeeeeeeeeeeeeensy weeeeeeeeeeensy critique...
Rouge, rogue, rouge rogues, rogues wearing rouge, rouge rogues wrecking dictionaries over the ROUGE ROGUE BIT!!!
...But this can work. SEND IN THE HEROIC SENTIENT COLOR PALETTE!
The interactions with Coco Pommel and Rarity's complete ignorance were hysterical. I still have no idea where this is going, apart from Coco's misunderstanding becoming a plot point, but I'm going to enjoy this if it keeps up the tone you've established so far.
Also, how is this the first time I've heard him called "Prince Blueballs"
Now THAT's acting like a proper dragon
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really Blueballs is the first choice for all fic that like to bend him over the bashing post
This was great. Already see a possible ending for this story with the idea of a bounty, but I'll keep my mouth shut.
I'm loving the ride way too much to spoil anything.
Please continue!
Well now, that's the first honest thing he's probably said in this story ever.....Can't we just banish Blueblood and Rarity's father already???
9186103 ...I think that this thing is so nuts that there doesn't need to have a punchline...
Also I personally hope that even though Coco says she's into mares, she discovers that she could be attracted to at least one male---Spike. Can't help but hope.
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I get that, this is just the first time I've run across that term in this context, I must not read a lot of Blueblood bash fics.
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Is this snark I'm reading?
Even Smaug would tell Rarity to chill'out with her obsession with gold.
That can be exploited. Like they can ask for the whole kingdom.
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True...true. Spike is a Purple Dragon after all, who's to say that not only that Rarity's time in Spike's castle will not only have her develop feelings for him, but Coco would discover that she's attracted to one male dragon. There's probably a backstory discussing why Spike is a pacifist, his peaceful nature makes him an incredible dragon.
"I don't bite! I swallow! ...That came out wrong, didn't it?"
(Just gonna let you decide where that could go. XD)
I was quite a bit curious about where this story would be going, but this is an absolute laugh. Keep up the good work!
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threesome!! Love to see that!
Just UGH. What is with Spike just letting everypony walk all over him and refusing to stand up for himself? He could more then easily kick out the shallow whore but chooses to let her walk all over him instead.
Shenanigans and hilarity will ensue.
...AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!😣😣😣😣😣😣😱😱😱😱😱😱
needs another paragraph line to separate spike and rarity clearly.