The Scooter Stopped Rolling

Cutie Mark(ed) Crusaders2,629 stories ·499 members

The day had started like any other. But had ended so terribly. Now one member of the CMC is gone, and the other two are shattered, overwhelmed with sorrow and guilt.

Can they ever forgive themselves?

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Stardust-pony

Stardust-pony #1 · Sep 4th, 2018 · · ·

T_T
Sad

SilverPony98

SilverPony98 #2 · Sep 4th, 2018 · · 1 ·

Press Ctrl Alt Delete on your keyboard to pay respects for poor Scootaloo each time she dies in a story.

RebelNarrator45

RebelNarrator45 #3 · Sep 4th, 2018 · · ·

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"Press Ctrl Alt Delete on your keyboard to pay respects for poor Scootaloo each time she dies in a story."

Um.......so, is that a "dang it, this is so sad!", or is it a "for the love of Celestia, STOP KILLING OFF POOR SCOOTALOO!!!!"?

Also I noticed as many down votes as up votes.....not very encouraging....

In my defense, I was experiencing a mood swing of sorts and trying to resolve some major internal conflict with a plate of brownies and more coffee than anyone should probably drink at one time.....

....that might possibly explain the somewhat sorry excuse for a sad story......if not maybe excuse it, just a little???

Appreciate all the feedback, negative or positive or whatever is in between, as it lets me know which parts of the story are great, and which ones need major help......