Mac thought it was just an ordinary day, but then he gets on the bus and it's not.
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Dat Big Mac picture.
Such a talent.
Oh god, time to bleach my eyes and forget I ever read that.
Edit: Hell, on second thoughts, I'm gonna drink some of that bleach. Nom, disinfectant-y.
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Equestrian Deadpool thought it was just an ordinary day, but then he read this story and it's not.
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It was like discovering I had several forms of rare skin cancer, and that my AIDS had cancer, so my AIDS was growing with each second. Then it felt like angry Syrians were chasing me around Iran, waving their kaffiyehs in the air while chanting 'YMCA'. Then George Bush flew in by helicopter and smoked many a cigar.
I'm not sure about this. I guess it would help if I had ever seen Foster's Home for Imaginary Kids/Friends or whatever it's called.
Anyway, something vaguely constructive! Writing wasn't too bad (I've seen a LOT worse (hell, I've written a lot worse)), the problem with it, however, is the lack of... something. There's nothing to make you think "Sweet Celestia what the hay is going on?!", if that makes sense, it's more like "Oh... I'm a horse, fair enough."
Also, some people might get a bit annoyed at such blocky paragraphs. Personally, it's fine for me. I'm just sayin'...
Anyway, good luck and have fun.
Well due to that cover image i may never sleep again...
What did I just read.
Oh.
My.
God.
...
No.
I thought it was just an ordinary day until I saw the cover art, then my crotch exploded.
lol, I just came here to troll.
DEAR JESUS HUMPING THE CATHOLIC POPE THAT WALL OF TEXT IS LIKE THE FUSELAGE OF A NASA FUEL TANK.
Onto the story!
You know, I had an easier time understanding the Divine Comedy.
IN ITALIAN.
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All my what
Well, just for the record, this story was not meant to be taken seriously. I expected a lot of negative feedback, and I got just that, but I also got a couple thumbs up. But for some of you, I feel like you're just not getting the feel of the story. The cover art was meant to make the story look as unprofessional as possible; it was made in, as the saying goes, 10 seconds flat. But for those of you who truly believe there's a bigger story to Big Mac, this is the worst story you will ever read.
I came to this.
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