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oOSlowMotionOo
I only like Straight Dash shipping (I am immediately turned off when people mention lesbian dash). I love gays, but lesbian dash is a little stereotypical.
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cant wait for an update ... this is seems very well written hope the story develops and reaches its full potential
Hah, I love those, stallion-on-stallion scenes. Get's me hard every time. Oh yeah.
...Ouch. Even when RD is straight, she can't catch a break, ha ha ha.
Thanks everyone who commented and read my story! This is my first serious fan fiction since becoming a pegasister (I never finished my other one, too boring). It is very fun to write and you can expect two updates every weekend (One on Saturday, One on Sunday).
Thanks :)
Hah, you made her sound like a whore! You make the Mane Six sound like a bunch of trashy, street whores, even without speaking about them. Where do you live?
Okay, everyone read Chapter 2 again. I made some changes that really help.
:D :D :D :D :D :D
CLIFFHANGAS, WE MEET AGAIN
I'm in the zone, so I'm going to write another chapter! This is so dang fun ;)
o.o i cant wait to see where this is goin.....
Did she get pregnant from Caramel? Oh gawd...
please hurry up and finish this story PLEASE
SureFreeD i don't think she got pregnant from Caramel if she does get pregnant in the story i think it will be from Lightning bolt!
oOSlowMotionOo could you hurry up and finish i can't wait to read the ending
and DON'T tell me what happened it would completely ruin the story i will be so sad if you ruin the story
i sense that shes gonna raaaaaaaaaage
then again...:)
cant wiat for the next chapter comin out
RAIP!!! RAPE HER RAPE HER RAPE HER RAPE HER RAPE HER RAPE HER RAPE HER!!!! RAPERAPERAPERAPERPERAPERAPEPASTRYRAPERAPERAPEDUCKRAPERAPE
this isn't gonna turn out well for caramel and when Lightning finds out this isn't gonna be good for Rainbow Dash Lightning might leave her i doubt it but it is possible!
lolol rape
Wow.
And...
First!
D: caramel....the evil.....
still, cliffhanga's i hate ya so much, and i can smell that a shitstormsa brewin
Carmel must be sent to the deepest reaches of Pony Hell for his sins.
Zecora must have some form of Plan B Contraceptive amidst her many potions, right?
Goddamn rapists.
Me : OOOOOOOO! YOU MUST DIE! BLAAAAAAAARGH!
Caramel : *DED*
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Just like your avatar
if i was dash when i got untied i would get up and CHOKE caramel to death
I enjoyed your first few chapters, but I felt this one was rather...rushed, I guess. I'm at a loss for words.
I guess a lot of important things happened with limited detail. I love the story none the less and will contine to follow it, but just some friendly words of advice. Just remember to take your time with the story.
Freak you Caramel.
hey hurry up and finish it has been about a week since last update
64045 Okay. I actually was rushing. I had h.w to do and I wanted to finish before I lost my train of thought.
WHOA!!!!
Didn't see that coming...oh and before someone beats me to it....WHAT A 
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So I decided to publish this early. Later I'm going to my mom's party and then sleeping at my grandma's house, and this isn't something you would want your grandma to see.
Can someone tell me what this story is rated? My computer's connection is going beserk and is only showing what I rated this story.
..... im thinking of comitting homiside after reading this
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It is, when I post this, at 1.8 stars out of 73 ratings.
>> oOSlowMotionOo when i read this it was 1.8 out of 75 ratings
Can someone tell me how I can improve the story? 1.8 stars is not good
YAY early chapter
Bumbaclat! What da bloody 'ell?! Caramel, you...you... *ya know wat happens*
If i may make some critizism, This chapter feels a bit rushed. Not to step on your hooves or anything, just my humble opinion. Other then that, Great work!
Since you asked how to improve it, I'll speak my opinion. Most of your chapters are rather short, and I think your story might benefit from less frequent but longer stories.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO my favorite book is On Hiatus NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
So... Caramel kissed lightning. if i was lightning here is what i would do "take lead pipe beat the %$&* ^$@! *^$#%()%)^$ out of him and big mac
that $%^$&^&** Caramel!! Well, yayy! A new chapter coming early
good work! Keep it up!
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... And then neuter Caramel with a rusty meat cleaver.
72925 Thanks! I need some time to think up some new chapters that are not as short. I'm planning on beginning this story again by Christmas.
4.0 ratings, well deserved!
74194 couldn't say it any better myself
74194 I could also cut Caramel's dick off and rape Big Mac with it.
yay my favorite book is Off Hiatus