Tyler 1 In Equestria : Shitty Writer Edition

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Jackelope

Jackelope #1 · Nov 28th, 2018 · 4 · 1 ·

Seeing the title and cover made me giggle. It's written competently enough, definitely room for improvement. It'll at least get people to click and notice you. With enough time you could become a really good writer Just take your time writing stuff, listen to proofreaders/editors, write some more good stories and you'll build yourself an audience in no time. Ciao.

Also, instead of notepad, I'd recommend Libreoffice. Not only is it free, it's less gimmicky and complex. Really nails the Occam's razor vibe in its simplicity. I'd also recommend google docs so you can allow others to edit it and such. Despite that, I primarily do my writing on libreoffice and then copypaste it to docs so that others can look over it.

There, hope that helped. And you're actually a more competent writer than some other writers on this site in terms of grammar and such. So there's a chance for you yet.

ShadowFall

ShadowFall #2 · Nov 29th, 2018 · 2 · 1 ·

Enable ratings or I run it down mid

skyrimlegion

skyrimlegion #3 · Nov 29th, 2018 · · ·

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Surprised you're actually giving legit advice for a trollfic. Admirable, but stupid.

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Fuck you, Riot Games!

GentleGarbage

GentleGarbage #4 · Nov 29th, 2018 · · ·

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_________________lol no_______________

In all serious though, no. This is a terrible work and ratings because 'le memes' aren't really my thing. I'll probably work on more serious works that actually have a stable plot line in the future,
Or maybe a story that has a plot in general. Or maybe a story with juicy tender pony plot if I actually put my fetishes into words and make you want eye bleach.

giganticcats