• Member Since 8th Dec, 2012
  • offline last seen March 8th

Rambling Tree


Witty remark.

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What if Celestia started out as a boring everyday human like you or me?
Than through no fault of her own is dragged away from her life by one very annoying Discord to start over in a new one.

Regardless of her opinion.

Rated "Teen" for bad pick up lines.

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Comments ( 4 )

Amusing premise and a few decent jokes, but this needs a lot of editing and proofreading.

All it takes is one bad day.:pinkiecrazy: And boy, did Discord just make tia's day one of the worst ever.

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Thanks. And Your right. It's a skill I'm still working on.


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:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

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Do keep working at it. The most important thing for an author is to have something worth saying. Learning to say it properly will take time.

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