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DeathKing


Just someone who read a fic and loved it, and now I'm stuck wanting to read more.I might even try to write a story or two.

Comments ( 9 )

Erm... you shouldn’t use an emoji in any writing, and a lot of the time you use your instead of you’re.

Also, caps lock is not a great way to express emphasis. Try italics. Or, rarely, bold. But all italics can ruin things as well.

9186944
Thanks, I forgot to take the emoji out. And about the all-caps, I couldn't decided between it and bold.... So I flip coin to decide.:derpytongue2:

9186982

But you’ve got a lot of work ahead of you, but if you presist, get a writing composition book or two, you could do pretty wel!

Could you add sex scenes in the next chapter?
They will make your story more interesting.

9213631
I will don't. Just been short on time and money from helping my brother buy a house.:applecry:

9213702
I have intended to add sex scenes into story but not so soon though. But I think of a small scene add in the next chapter. Besides I could use the practice in writing sex scenes anyway. Also I forgot to add the sex tag:twilightsheepish:

I ready enjoyed this story. Can’t wait for more

9353291
I try and get the chapter out as soon as I can. Life keeps getting in the way. Oh how I wish I had no life to live, so I can live my life how I want... Which doesn't make sense, does it?:rainbowderp:

9355364
Trust me, I know the feeling.

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