This story is a sequel to Past Sins AU:Primordial Crimes(Project Helia)
Starlight Glimmer, amazing mare who travels from town to town solving problems, switching marks, learning friendship lessons, and rivaling Trixie and Sunset. Come and see her beginnings how after she loses her friend Sunburst who goes away to attend Luna's magic school, she descends into a dark and emo life. However when an evil rogue mage comes to town she meets a team of knight's who ask for her fathers aide and Starlight becomes obsessed with learning about this mysterious stallion leading the pack: Mars, who seems to have also taken a liking to her.
See her overcome her emo angst, and then on an epic mission for the fate of Equestria and setting her on her destined path with her new mentor!
Starlight art by: Xebeck
Mars base by: Oshipush
Overall cover by: Me
Simply excellent job on the characterizations, exchanges, action, general wrap-up and future story set-up in this piece.
Now, on to the bios.
Excellent work on the info in these bios. The back stories on all three of these featured characters is well done. And, I will admit that Tamer actually did have an unfortunate point about Equestria ignoring the plight of other races (which is why the Storm King was able to last as long as he did. if Equestria did a better job keeping track of the stuff that happened outside their borders and helping [and accepting help from] the other races, the Storm King's army would NOT have caught them off-guard).
So, yeah, splendid story overall.
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I plan to update the sheet with cards on the other knights who helped such as Earth-Stomper, Blackwind Tri-Star, and Jupitris. I am not totally set on whether Sunbeam will get a card and Stellar Flare definitely won't because she was more background then anything and Sunburst will have a card in the main story.
As for Tiger's point, well it was meant to accent that he cared deeply about others while his nation refused to get involved in others affairs. He even stayed and fought the Storm King himself in Abysennia for some time as a guerrilla leader before coming back and instigating his coup. Yes it WAS the Storm-King who will eventually appear in the main series or a side story as a villain and Moon-Dancer will be his second.
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I got the ending from Justice League, I loved how Steppinwulf was devoured by his Parademon's and decided that is what would happen to Tiger after all losing his mark would make them disobedient and these are animals that can rip a pony apart. (Tiger still lives though just badly hurt). I was glad you enjoyed the fic I was hoping I got emo glimmer right.