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therandomemu


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976844 Should I tell it again or at parties?

976965 YAY ANUBIS! My favorite god from the game Age of Mythology. Also, he is the best animal headed god EVAR!!!

Dun dun dunnn!
On a more serious note, this story is quite good, you need to keep writing. Only problems I could find was that was too quick, the ending was rushed and was somewhat confusing, and regular grammar and spelling errors. Good job.

I'm happy your asked me to be Death's best friend. I'm still gonna need more details

One thing I want to add. If I get enough people not liking a chapter, I will rewrite it. Also the reason why this chapter was late (even though I never set a deadline til today) I was owning at League of Legends (read my A Twisted Fate story) and playing prototype 2, along with Minez.

I need new chapter soon and also YAY I WAS PUT IN A FIC

1019990 lol didn't know I knew how to write. Teachers always saying my writing sucks... (not in those exact words though) Also, one of my friends is wanting me to continue a failed story cause he liked it. I will work on that until a I finished another chapter. So maybe a week? idk I will also be working on my 'A Twisted Fate' story a bit, I am due for a chapter. busy week. Good thing I don't really sleep or have social interaction. :scootangel: Also might actually be longer, I just downloaded my favorite story that I never finished, Coal's MSL. It was deleted when I was at like chapter 60, and that was like 2 months ago, so im rereading it. I love you all, and if I get the chance, next year I should be posting videos on youtube :D I will be taking the next exit to my future
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1020040 OH you have coal bucks story downloaded!?!?! Could you send me the link in a message

Cool story dude.
and ive been thinking of a name for the other stallion how about Morte if not then just giving a suggestion

1020344 lol mort cool name, fits the description (idk what the description is, I just want to sound professional) He seems cool. Also, I left the stallion very blank, so if you wanted to, you could be that stallion, and yadda yadda. DERP! sorry just had to say that.

I do like the story, but seriously man, flesh out the idea a little... (lol)

Just, slow the pace down. It's moving very quickly...

-Jorofrarie

1020374 I think you should name the other Sauron from Lord of The Rings.
By the way, good job on the story so far, I already tracked the story.

1116660 Lotr was one of my favorite movies. I have the full set, but...
*sigh* I never actually payed attention movie. All I need to know is... Legolas y u such boss :D
d24w6bsrhbeh9d.cloudfront.net/photo/3475287_700b.jpg :D also i am working on the story right now. Sorry if it took a while (takes). I just started playing minez again, also MANN VS MACHINE RULEZ!!! I love you all :D, cept you Steven, you need to put your clothes back on.

When is next chapter? It been a year. I tired of waiting patiently...

2879164 boom 1 day away from 1 year. I win:derpytongue2:

2973676 when is the next chapter coming?

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