One thing I want to add. If I get enough people not liking a chapter, I will rewrite it. Also the reason why this chapter was late (even though I never set a deadline til today) I was owning at League of Legends (read my A Twisted Fate story) and playing prototype 2, along with Minez.

I need new chapter soon and also YAY I WAS PUT IN A FIC

1019990 lol didn't know I knew how to write. Teachers always saying my writing sucks... (not in those exact words though) Also, one of my friends is wanting me to continue a failed story cause he liked it. I will work on that until a I finished another chapter. So maybe a week? idk I will also be working on my 'A Twisted Fate' story a bit, I am due for a chapter. busy week. Good thing I don't really sleep or have social interaction. Also might actually be longer, I just downloaded my favorite story that I never finished, Coal's MSL. It was deleted when I was at like chapter 60, and that was like 2 months ago, so im rereading it. I love you all, and if I get the chance, next year I should be posting videos on youtube :D I will be taking the next exit to my future
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1020040 OH you have coal bucks story downloaded!?!?! Could you send me the link in a message

Cool story dude.
and ive been thinking of a name for the other stallion how about Morte if not then just giving a suggestion

1020344 lol mort cool name, fits the description (idk what the description is, I just want to sound professional) He seems cool. Also, I left the stallion very blank, so if you wanted to, you could be that stallion, and yadda yadda. DERP! sorry just had to say that.

I do like the story, but seriously man, flesh out the idea a little... (lol)

Just, slow the pace down. It's moving very quickly...

-Jorofrarie

1020374 I think you should name the other Sauron from Lord of The Rings.
By the way, good job on the story so far, I already tracked the story.

1116660 Lotr was one of my favorite movies. I have the full set, but...
*sigh* I never actually payed attention movie. All I need to know is... Legolas y u such boss :D
d24w6bsrhbeh9d.cloudfront.net/photo/3475287_700b.jpg :D also i am working on the story right now. Sorry if it took a while (takes). I just started playing minez again, also MANN VS MACHINE RULEZ!!! I love you all :D, cept you Steven, you need to put your clothes back on.

When is next chapter? It been a year. I tired of waiting patiently...