• Member Since 26th Jul, 2012
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Brink Carnwell


Writer of short stories.

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Years ago, only recently after the banishment of Nightmare Moon, one of the dark mare's most devout followers looks to cause the upheaval her master sought. With an amassed army larger than anything seen before in Equestria, Malevolent Hatred (Nightmare Moon's follower) stands at the doorstep of Canterlot. Without any other option the Royal Guard and an elite company of Pegasi known as the Weather Corps move to take on the the encroaching army. Who will come out on top?

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Thanks! I admit that the plot and character development is... lacking, at best. I suppose that's what I get for trying to condense a large scale war into less than 4,000 words. At any rate, I'd recommend taking a look at the other story I have up. As its going to be divided into chapters I'm hoping to build up character relationships and plot over a longer span of time.

Thanks for reading!

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