An experimental bio-mechanical mare is trapped the hooves of a dark enterprise, and she now finds herself lost in darkness. With no prior thought or history, and actually no prior existence, she must find a path out of the living nightmare of the Cypony project.
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YO! Saw your comment on Steel Soul and decided to have a look at this. And I like it!
One typo, though: "She peered out through it, looking at what way beyond the metal cover." I think that's supposed to be"She peered out through it, looking at what lay beyond the metal cover."
Cheers.