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It took me a WHILE to draw that perfectlly sketched, lifelike image of the "horseshoe" magnet that you see on the Cover Art!!!

Well anyway, Twilight learns a new spell that can transform any object to have magnetic properties. She then tests the spell on Spike, and all that I can say is, "He get's trapped."

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Heh, I like it. So many innuendos... Anyways, my only qualm would be that it should be effects not affects, but aside from that it was fine.

I thought this was kind of sweet. :twilightblush: Predictable, but funny.

Wait, what? I don't remember submitting this story... :facehoof:

*Turns around from laptop to his face his brony squad*

"Hey! who the hell submitted this story to FiMFiction!?"
> "Wasn't me."
> "Not me."
> "Me either."
> "Don't look at me."

"You know what? Buck all of you."

Another one of these... :facehoof:

Oh well, it was almost funny at times.

oh, i get it. the innuendo is that spike likes to wear clothing, right?

This feels almost unfinished...
Remember that comedy reaches it's pinnacle when the situation is taken completely seriously. Randomly spouting innuendos may be okay a few times, but you shouldn't rely solely on one-liners.

when you mentioned spike wanting to come out of the closet I thought everypony was going to take it as an euphemism that spike is gay and wants other ponies to know it

So,,, basically you wanted a story long running gag about Spike "coming out of the closet." And here I thought he was gonna get magnetized to Rarity's ass or something interesting. :facehoof:

...........................wtf just to random even for a random

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