A teacher stands atop her castle, lost amidst days long past.
A student stands beside her mentor, mired in sleep's tenacious grasp.
As today begins, yesteryear's lessons are revealed.
What do you see in the sunrise?
A teacher stands atop her castle, lost amidst days long past.
A student stands beside her mentor, mired in sleep's tenacious grasp.
As today begins, yesteryear's lessons are revealed.
What do you see in the sunrise?
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful
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I liked this! Though, it would've helped to have more character tags, and some art. You'd attract readers to it more easily. It'd help things look more complete.
This should have a lot more attention than it does. Vivid, beautiful writing.