The climax of the Seven Days in Sunny June saga: Sunset Shimmer faces her biggest challenges, among them the return of HUMAN Sunset Shimmer! And yet things can - and WILL - get worse...
Unable to handle her anxiety without the memory stone, Wallflower Blush tries to end her life. The attempt leaves her too injured to recover, and with just hours left to live, she expects to die all alone—until Sunset Shimmer appears, asking, “Why?"
(GTA 5/Online Crossover) Because of the magic occurences, Sunset and her friends are attacked by multiple groups. Fortunately, the two groups that don't want to hurt them are also the most dangerous ones.
Starlight won. She prevented the sonic rainboom. She stopped the mane six from getting their cutie marks. Unfortunately she did so at the cost of her own life. Twilight managed to tell Celestia and a younger Sunset everything before fading away. AU.
It was a good concept, but I feel like the characters were not acting characteristically and there was WAY too much cusssing. Stick to your own ideas, you do not need to use other ideas to have a good story.
Sorry to say, bit this story is crazy.
If your refrencing GTA.....
......It needs a GTA tag
i did not know it was going to have curse words
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**points to "Profanity" tag**
But, yes, I did find the swearing a bit excessive.
It was a good concept, but I feel like the characters were not acting characteristically and there was WAY too much cusssing. Stick to your own ideas, you do not need to use other ideas to have a good story.
Ok...
This... is the worst story I ever read, I'm not playing a GTA game ever I prefer sticking Fallout, Call of Duty, and Wolfenstein.