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Lol!
Interest is rising, I await more.
Okay, A Fluttershy with minotaur strength, pegasus flight, and unicorn-like magic? Unless it's minotaur magic, then I'm calling shenanigans.
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I swear the rush is a bit on accident, I'll try to slow it down, plus I'm still keeping the anthro thing going.
maybe it's because I want to get to other episodes, maybe I'm excited to get through season 1, set this fic as completed and add in this pic for the season two fic:
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either way, apologies again.
Discord: Ho Ho Ho, I think I like this strange pegotaur. Let's see if I can teach her Chaos Magic?
Hmmm, Twilight sounds so casual about staying in the psychiatric ward. Maybe this is not her first time?
I see what you did there with Kris Overstreets inclusion...
Well played
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Did you know Suirano did draw anthro futa buxom Fluttershy in his Temptation comic series? I can't think of a more perfectly matched image for your story.
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/106486/unwell
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I'm calling Mary Sue unless there is a VERY good explanation
As to "Celestia wasn't surprised" If you accept the EQ Girls movies as canon to your verse, then Starswirl used portals to dump monsters into other universes & Celestia (at least) knows of human worlds
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Of course Sui has something like that, he's freaking Suirano. But his art really focuses on the soft plumpness of the female form, no well defined muscles or even abs on his ladies.
Having an Anthroshy pic with muscular arms and chiseled abs for this story would be good to emphasize her minotaur strength, but that would probably be hard to find because Fluttershy is seen as the least physically active and most motherly of the mane six.
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Now, now. Let them have their fun. The genre tags are Comedy, Slice of life, and Porn. The author isn’t trying to write some grand narrative that Deus Ex Fluttershy would break apart by negating crises and tension. If there were tags that insinuated that recreations of the crisis episodes would be given serious consideration, then I’d be worried. In this case however, the tags tell a different story, so unless we’re explicitly told otherwise, this shouldn’t be taken as the kind of story where OP characters are a deal breaker. The canonical crises are likely to all be side shows given the track record so far with the minor Season 1 issues.
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LOL!
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XD.... But tbh Id tap that :p
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well, I did hint that a Pegasi's magical output was based on their physical traits, in a normal case, that means they'd fly faster for longer and have better control over the weather, but their wings could not act as focal points to manipulate that magic for spells like a unicorn horn can.
Minotaurs don't have a lot of innate magic, but their physical might is ridiculous, translated to a pegasus with those magic laws I just mentioned, she'd have a magical capacity beyond that of a normal pegasus or unicorn, and the fingers of her body, long pointed appendages, that could act as points for wizardry. apologies if this didn't come out as clear as I hoped.
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I am still trying to make a story, even if comedy is a part of it, even if hard futanari sex is a part of it, this is a what if scenario to make you horny, make you laugh, but still have an actual narrative underneath as this version of Fluttershy tackles what the original would, with vastly different results, I try, and sometimes fail, to make the characters as accurate as possible, and if this was some silly throwaway concept, I would never think about doing every season of mlp for it.
I'm really trying, and I thank you all for your support, but please don't assume I just want to make something stupid, because I want to be known for making decent, engaging stories, like Tatsurou, who was one of my inspirations to get into writing to begin with.
I just want to say this. we write for fun. I think that's true for everyone here, and we read for fun.. please try and be polite about criticisms, some of us take it pretty hard, irrational or not.
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& that's ANOTHER thing. Not much porn for a porn tag.
Well. he's doing well enough that I'll follow for awhile, but IMO, there's some "Danger Ahead" signs
IMO, the next few chapters will tell.
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okay... that actually makes me think... should I get rid of the Porn Tag? I mean its kind of evolved from that, I mean yeah there's a lot of sex but...
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I'm not sure about the site rules. Maybe substitute "Sex" for "Porn"? & a note that it's not very graphic?
Maybe ask the site admin for a decision -you wouldn't want to get in trouble for breaking the rules.
Sorry, this story started off with gteat potential but you've turned it into the stupidest Mary Sue ever...
And you did indeed skullfuck the timeline for your own wish fulfillment so even worse since the character is just as crazy and self serving as Discord. (Just without the omnipotence)
I'm probably done with this mess as it will probably write itself into a corner at this rate...
I love the story I don’t care if you skullfucked the timeline or not I just want more sexy times
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I read all the explanations and this really does seem to have all of the sudden become much less... A lot of things.
Warning, most of this is just an unending not very nice rant about magic and Mary Sues, mostly magic.
It's not directly insulting anyone but it's not in a generally nice tone in most parts.
Regardless of the insanity of it all even if being a Minotaur gave more strength to Pegasus magic wouldn't it still be inherently different from unicorn magic, leaving even the most ass blastingly roided up pegasus/minotaurasus still unable to do unicorn spells? Because you know, of the completely different kinds of magic they use? Or are Pegasus just weak unicorns? If so, how does their physical fitness affect their magic when it doesn't matter for unicorns?
And I mean sure, maybe they'd be able to create new spells that mimic unicorn spells but they'd have to learn and invent it all on their own because they'd be the first one of even trying to accomplish such a feat with no help and no experience that's gotta be like at least a couple weeks on each spell more realistically months or years if you don't want to accidentally magic someone inside out or melt them into a puddle with red hot acid filled with deadly venomous lava snakes.
But I think I'm just getting way too worked up in this, there's nothing wrong with just writing a balls to the way comedy thing where logic doesn't matter. That can be super fun to both write and read.
But this is a Mary Sue story at this point, it might not be later but as of yet absolutely none of the protagonists actions has had anything less then an overwhelming positive consequence for them.
But then again even that can be fun for the right crowd.
Now, a lot of that's just complete BS that I just want get off my chest otherwise it'd just keep rattling around in my head, especially the magic stuff. It's magic, who gives a shit it can do whatever the hell the story needs it to.
I can't continue this fic right now, the amount of upsetting feedback involving Fluttershy being called a Mary Sue and people waving off my genuine attempts at setting up lore and concepts that make sense as 'it's supposed to be nonsense and stupid fun' makes it hard to be engaged in writing... I might get back to it at some point but my heart's not in it at the moment.
so if you're upset about not seeing updates for a while, you can thank those assholes.
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As one who has been following this story, I am sorry to hear some negative comments made you feel down.
I just want to tell you that you should take every comments with a grain of salt. They are, after all, other opinions. It is inevitable that some of them might not agree with yours. You should view them as idea that others freely toss to you. It is entirely up to you whether you would use them or not. You have no obligation to change your story to satisfy some readers. What about others who like what you are doing? This is a fanfic for goodness sake - not a commission work. It is an outlet for the author's imagination. In other word, a personal view. It is to be expected that somebody might not like your story. As Bakuman manga once said 'Writing a manga is pretty much a gamble', meaning you cannot guarantee that your work will always be widely accepted - even the greatest of the writers is susceptible to this fact. There is no story with zero dislike.
So if you satisfy with your story, just go for it. You can always come back and change them later if you think you have a new, better idea that would improve your story. You should not let some negative criticism hinder your inspiration.
I, for one, think your story has many intriguing idea. Fluttershy as an anthro in a world of quadrupeds? Will she cause an anthropomorphic fad when she become a model? Will her ability to use magic (even only telekinesis) cause an uproar in Canterlot prissy nobles? (I expect Blueblood or Jet Set to demand her arrest on the charge of trying to imitate an alicorn.) etc. They are many things that I am looking forward to seeing how this cunning, ex-human futa Fluttershy handle the upcoming events.
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*deep breath* ... I needed that... thank you, the problem was I'm driven by feedback, knowing people enjoy my work makes me feel good and want to keep going.
but it wasn't just straight up negativity, it was people downright assuming things about my story that I don't want to be anywhere near what I'm actually trying to do.
I might reconsider the hiatus thanks to your comment alone
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take your time is all I will say, I have been enjoying this, since I only care if a story is well written, not how powerful a character is, which if I complained about that, it would be a case of pot, meet kettle
I'll be honest, I don't really know what to say after that response. Whatever I say it'll probably just make things worse.
So I'll just say two things, one Almost is a key word. And two swearing and yelling is not going to fix anything, I've had to learn that many times.
I died at the chapter titles. Winter Fap-up is my favorite so far!
i am quite enjoying this sorry people are being dicks about it
the story is great but the anthro is way left field there was no warning for it i mean i would be cool with it if there was a warning in the beginning
but nope. also don't pay any of them attention fluttershy is nowhere near a mary sue.
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Don't get me wrong we like your story but some of the choices are baffling, sure her wanting to be anthro makes a fair amount of sense with her originally being human and all. Not to mention she isn't exactly a superhero so her being this strong doesn't come up very often. I mean if the story was about her suplexing bad guys this would be different but so far her being anthro is more of a side note so that doesn't really make her a mary sue. Though you said they need a magic Focus to do different spells and she doesn't have that. It feels like you are breaking your own rules a bit there. My suggestion would have been that she just gets a magic crystal after that talk with Trixie and learns ritual magic. she could have easily just made a magic circle and cast any spell using that and a gem to power it. That way teh rules stay consistent and her magic is more indirect.
Also, I feel like I should clarify what makes someone a Mary Sue Most people don't use that word right and it annoys me. A True Mary sue isn't just powerful, she doesn't get things wrong. For example, let's take twilight, for example, yes she is crazy strong compared to the everyone else in the show I honestly don't think we have seen the literal god ponies show as much magic as she did when she hatched spike from that egg and she was really young at that time. But she fails a lot, things don't go her way, and occasionally she will break down mentally... like in this chapter. While someone like Ray from those new star wars movies is nowhere near that strong but she has not done one "wrong" thing in the movies and that is what a mary sue is.
I still love this story with its deadpan humor and the character seeing all the bull crap us fans think while watching the show but my suggestion is to have her mess up from time to time. Have one of her plans go wrong or she could make things worse out of nowhere. I even have a good place to start "Stare Master" is coming up and while she could prevent it she has not shown the ability to use that stare. My suggestion is that she should fail in stopping the crusaders and getting the snake chicken to turn them back. From there she should bring the statues back home after escaping and try to get the princesses to help turn them back. she fails and the chapter has a surprise in it that not many will be expecting.
Oh God I just got reminded of friendship is manly because of fluttershy's new body
This story is a Blessing Beautiful story
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O yeah!
Add two milk mountains and were are golden
Was wondering when that would happen. At least she's playing the humble and not going mad with power.
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. . . What in the buck did I just watch?
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Find part two and I'm pretty sure a Jojo reference.
Hentai will make them rich!
That's the oldest trick in the book hahahaha LOL ROFLMAO