Follow the adventures of Human Turned Pegasus... with a twist~.
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it lives, great, now lets ser how thing foes, hope it doesnt take long
Being aware of how motivating comments can be, I can only say that I am waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
A vary interesting tack one of these types of story's I will be watching this keep up the good.work
Well, well, well, let us see what shenanigans they all up to in this story, hhhhhhuuummm?
I await ze next chapter
This story makes me laugh so much it's hard to breath! Can't wait for more Ark! and because I couldn't deiced which one of these clips to choose I'll just use them all.
More Please!
I need more not to mention I want the sex scenes, please. that is the whole reason i am following this story the sex
Don't call it a cumback,
I've been here for months
please get the reference
I don't mean like that
I’ve really been waiting for this, it’s unique and funny there really isn't enough “human mind in a main character” stories and this one has a great twist. I especially love the way they reacted to that son line that was REALLY in character for twilight an spike.
Looking forward to more of this, kinkiness with humor make a great combination
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Why are they cumming on your back, did they miss your face?
Oh my god "leave cumments" i died laughing!!
I feel like dropping the story here. It feels like it's trying way too hard to be funny.
The whole 'I can't keep it in my pants' part is, well, annoying. No one acts like this. It's not funny. It's not dramatic or relatable either.
Her journal is like the Matrix, I guess? He now knows all about music, singing and flutter-fu.
Is this clunky or what? Something went horribly wrong with this sentence.
In Soviet Russia headcannons have yo-ooou!
Seriously, I'm now tempted to write a fic where a brony-in-Equestria gets in trouble because of his assumptions and preconceptions.
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the journal was filled with Fluttershy's personal memories, the rest come from his human time as a brony.
I think that sentence is fine the way it is.
it has been made apparent in Canon that Fluttershy is an expert on non-pony anatomy and dietary requirements, like how she inherently knew a ridiculous amount about Breezies.
critique all you want but please be constructive about it, just because you don't like it doesn't mean you have to ruin it for everyone else.
Why do i have a vibe of the start of the show?
Bloody hell... They starved Spike of his needed food? The fuck...
Kindness indeed. Standing before others to the benefit of others. Also nice trolling
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Rest in Peace... Your laugther will be sorely mist
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I agree with all my heart! I love the story
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Good judgement?
Careful there, calling Spike her son was extremely presumptuous, especially in a position of being a complete stranger...
Lol
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They look very alike...
Rainbowdash jizzed her magic into the world and the mares receive it. Twilight giving life.
So Rainbowdash is the daddy and Twilight is Spikes mommy.
"leave cumments"