Hmm... so how will this stories Clop/Story ratio be?

Welp you caught my attention with this story...now i'm just waiting for the train wreck of the reveal!

Hm. Cute and delightful. Upvoted and tracked! Looking forward to more! ...Also, I notice someone is a Critical Role fan. HA!

Following, but I think you should get one of the editors to clean up pieces of your story

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yeah... editors... I have those... certainly don't write these things all on my own...

*nervous laughter*

What's so soft? Your hooves or a pillow that you're furiously humping?

Now i dont normally read futa stories but i quite like this one

And apparently, after reading a book out of curiosity, Ponies are like other herbivores, they can eat meat, it’s just with their pacifistic nature they don’t. And if you don’t believe me, google it, herbivores can and have eaten meat before.

“Well… if you need a place to stay, my cottage is open, if you’re okay with not hunting and eating fish while you’re there.”

that makes it sound like he should not hunt fish specifically, I’d suggest “and only eating fish while you’re there.”

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thanks for pointing that out to me, it's fixed now.

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I think in the context it'd be obvious, wouldn't it?

And apparently, after reading a book out of curiosity, Ponies are like other herbivores, they can eat meat, it’s just with their pacifistic nature they don’t. And if you don’t believe me, google it, herbivores can and have eaten meat before.

This story is good but it could have been better if the guy didn't act so much like Fluttershy

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don't worry, it won't be like that, as this is for different reasons:

1. he's trying to make sure he's not found out by not being shy as she is known for, even to her animals.

2. he's attempting to fight off instincts he never had before, so in public it's not just shyness but sheer determination to keep it in her non-existent pants.

so in short, she's not going to be scared of anything that Fluttershy would normally be (aka shadows, dragons, and many minor things.)
and will be prevalent during Nightmare Night instead of locked away.

...oh yeah, she will be working to becoming more assertive in order to fake that she's 'growing' as a pony and one more thing.

...Ark likes pranks.

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Hmmm that sounds interesting let's see what happens in future episodes and then I'll be the judge of how shy he really is.

It's only his first day, and he's already seduced a pillow...

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To be completely accurate, equines are very sensitive about their diet (amongst other things). Eating meat with any regularity would result in very serious health issues.

Though the amount of sugar they seem to consume in Equestria would leave a horse crippled for life...

And apparently, after reading a book out of curiosity, Ponies are like other herbivores, they can eat meat, it’s just with their pacifistic nature they don’t. And if you don’t believe me, google it, herbivores can and have eaten meat before.

Been there, done that.

I blink and mutter aloud. “How you managed to not end up Rainbow’s pet is beyond me.”

Fun fact: the peregrine falcon is the fastest bird on Earth. You'd think that would be right up Dash's alley.

I had discovered that yes, it’s why there’s a river leading from the everfree to my cottage in the first place… and despite what I suspected the fish seemed as dumb here as on Earth, so I had no guilt in catching them and deboning them for Harry, who seemed to rather enjoy boneless fish.

Name, should be capitalized
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I've read that the problem is that equines don't have a gall bladder. This means no gall, which in turn means that they can't digest fat.
This makes it like, say, celery or corn for us. I think.

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A potato can a quick way to health issues too!

Ponies are like other herbivores, they can eat meat

Yes finally someone who did their research

Fluttershy... Got to catch em all next heatseason.

Lopsided

...quit judging me!!

Reader: "Nope"...
*Fluttershy uses 'Stare' * - Its super effectiv.
Reader: " o...k...

Wait, the story tags Anthro, is it? 🤔

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Quadrapet as of now ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Happens later if i remember correctly.

This Fluttershy inspired mine a bit. But mine is a Thestral that don't have a 'STARE' ,but the power of being a sexy naughty mare~♡

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whats the story called?

I think it would have been hilarious if the freshly showered Rainbow Dash had caused a wingboner incident

...quit judging me!!

I'm not...

...quit judging me!!

nah I would do the same, heh.