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Now I really looking forward to seeing how she will handle Iron Will.
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Point taken
Awesome chapter I love how everything is going with this new Fluttershy in control I can tell that this story is gonna be hilarious
Kinda just... blasted... through the clop scene, didn't you?
Hard to enjoy when it's over almost as soon as it appears.
Having read the new chapter I wonder how this will change the timeline with Gilda now coming by more often. I’d assume not much will change since this and a cutie map episode are the only times we hear Gilda speak but the butterfly is sure changing things up now
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I... honestly don't know if you're genuinely being helpful or malicious at this point...
I mean it's that or you're subtly offering to be my editor.
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less blasted through and more 'found it harder and harder to fit it in without making it screw up the story.'
so yes, I was finding the opening for it get tighter and tighter and I wanted to stick it in as best I could without tearing my story's opening apart.
Monty Python.
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I give corrections for a LOT of stories. I'm not quite as bad as Sheldon (from Big Bang Theory). but I admit I'm pretty bad.
I remember back in the 1970s when the first Star Wars movie came out. They used "light week" as a measure of time, not distance. I damned near walked out & demanded my money back. My friends told me that they hadn't fixed it in the 25th anniversary edition, so I refused to see it. My mother bought me the boxed CD set for Christmas one year, but I've never watched that one -it's poisoned for me
Stories require "the willing suspension of disbelief" & IMO, typos make it harder. I'm a member of The Proofreader Group. Ordinarily, I do not proofread EQ Girls, Horror, or Porn. Your stuff is good enough that I'll make an exception if you want & proofread it. Or, you can get another free proofreader at https://www.fimfiction.net/group/27/]The Proofreader Group
Oh yes, & SweetOleBob? That's what my friends call me. Usually, just the initials but I'm sure that's what they mean.
Trust me, I've got over a hundred stories downloaded waiting to be read. If I didn't like this, I wouldn't read it. I'm not screwing with you. Who's got the TIME for that?
10/10, already looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it up!
I am interested.
So... when is she gonna get pregnant with Luna's foal, after the second, third or fourth~?
Love this story and can barely wait for more! Have a fave!
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Star Wars has many terms unique or altered for the setting and does have a definition ( I just don't remember the details of it) that makes sense. I never found those a detraction because considering many of the things they use and it taking place in a Galaxy far far away I expect new or altered terms and definitions for them.
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Then you are a great deal more forgiving about this sort of thing than I am.
Favorite quote from that author. Bonus points if you know who without looking it up
Took me a while to find this. Season 2
https://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=mlp+s2+e15+dash+wakes+fluttershy&&view=detail&mid=D17DA56ADD067905F2CAD17DA56ADD067905F2CA&&FORM=VRDGAR
I am so happy that this story is back!
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cool, then I expect Fluttershy to mention that to Luna if she tries to get out of a conversation with her.
Fluttershy trying to get back into Luna's pants: Hey, Luna, we should talk.
Traditional luna: I wish I could but I have a lot of royal duties to do and
Fluttershy: No you don't you and your sister don't do dick but speaking of dick...
Holy fuck, Angel Bunny is a god damn Killer Rabbit
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He's not just a killer rabbit.
https://youtu.be/pmu5sRIizdw
Fluttershy become 200% cooler... Also friction burn on croch boobs is hell... i guess...?
Aaaa... yesss ... The beginning of a great friendship... WITH BENEFITS
Fluttersex fiend and her 4th wall breaking...
Flutterbone sure has stamina
Hehe, she was thinking, "mission failed, we'll get em next time!"
Now then, don't threaten me with a good time.
*doing a Hyena impression*
Griffon is a sexy piece of feathered chickenwings.
I wonder if they give Flutters marehood aome mileage as well
The Griffon Itch.