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I'm loving this so far, and from what I saw, the changes have been less timeline annihilation and more timeline straightening, as Twilight is learning lessons she needs for her princess duties earlier, and even some lessons she didn't learn at all last time.
This episode is out of sequence (IMO, others are too, but AT LEAST this one). Fall Weather Friends pretty much HAS TO come before this, unless you reckon that Season 1 took more than 1 year.
Our kinky Element of Kindness now does have an ultimate weapon to control her Battle Bunny.
With her Party Cannon, of course ...right?
Flutter-turtle? I am pretty sure I haven't heard of this one before. Also, I am glad to see Gilda a frequent visitor to Ponyville. Though, I wonder how long will it take Rainbow to realize why she came visit.
Ah, yes. You drive miles, drink pints, weigh stone... you Brits sure do use the metric system!
I'm wondering how fertile Flutter's swimmers are. Will she need to worry about being a daddy across species?
I'm Australian mate, also fuck the imperial system.
YEY!!!!!
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And since it’s implied that the S4 premiere took place one year after the start of the season well Fall Weather Friends and Hearth’s Warming Eve needs to have come before these
AMEN. I used to hate wearing jeans as a kid for those same reasons (and because they pinch the crotch. Took me over 10 years before I was willing to try them again.
They Also restrict movement. A lot.
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The turtle was the toy turtle she got from Pinkie when they were trying to prank her... which she then put to "better" use...
So many chapters in so few days, is it my birthday? Nah, mine's not for another month!
I don't like jeans. They're coarse, and rough, and irritating... and they cover everything.
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Yeah, Hasbro says that the first three seasons were 1 year. This is mathematically possible (they cover 220 days), especially if you assume that most of the CMC episodes take place during other episodes & that the events of Magical Mystery Cure take place in 1 day. I have a partial timeline worked out in my blog
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/771839/the-answer-to-a-question-no-body-asked-part-2-episode-order-june
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/771500/the-answer-to-a-question-nobody-asked-episode-order
Many authors go with 1 season = 1 year because
1) It's simpler
2) More time for untold side adventures
I gotta admit to being a bit bummed by the whole Anthro thing... but, I'm still enjoying the story. Good Job.
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Well, I still think it doesn't seem right. Let me explain, cause there are several little things that say otherwise. I'm about to go deep into analysis, so be warned:
1: The grand galloping gala. The first season is basicly a giant lead up to it. Thennin sweet and elite, they comment that it's coming up again. Of course, for all we know, it could be more than once a year.
2: Tank. In tanks for the memories, Rd says it's their first winter together. Yet, a couple episodes after she got him, we get a christmasesque episode. Of course these episodes could be out of order, wouldn't be unheard of.
3, and the biggest evidence: Pinkie pie's birthday. Party of one, pretty self expkanatory. Then when we look at a friend in deed, Pinkie pie says her birthday isn't for 75 days. True, we don't know how long an equestrian year is, but... If it really had been only 1 year, that'd mean the amount of time between the series premiere to party of one, added to the time between a friend in deed to the season 4 premiere would be 75 days. Yeah, not likely.
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In Season 9, it is established that 1 year = 13 moons. If you assume 1 moon = 28 days, then 1 year = 364 days.
If the Summer Sun Celebration is an intercalary day, then that makes 1 year = 365 days
Season 4 starts 1 year to the day after the pilot. Season 5 starts no later than mid October
(If you assume Nightmare Night is on Halloween) because you have Princess Twilight,
then (probably) Castle Sweet Castle, then Scaremaster.
The second Gala is (probably) in November.
If you assume May The Best Pet Win is Spring of year 1, then Tanks For The Memories
is Winter, year 2 (& works for being Dash's first Winter with Tank)
I've always gone with Party of One being just after Best Night Ever
& intended to console Pinkie for the Gala being such a dud party.
The best piece of evidence for the seasons being more than 1 year is Apple Family Reunion
One Bad Apple is Summer, year 1 (& one of the last episodes before MMC), early June, year 2
School is out & in the reunion Babs mentions liking her new school. So, this has to be August-October, year 2
That is, AFTER Twilight is an Alicorn (going by first 3 seasons = 1 year).
This is just barely possible because Twilight is the only character who doesn't have at least a cameo
Oh & in Princess Twilight, Celestia strongly implies but does NOT explicitly state that
it has been 1 year since the pilot, so it could be 1 season = 1 year
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Very possible. Honestly, I just think they weren't really thinking about a set timeline when they set all this up.
alright, getting this out of the way as soon as possible, I am going to be going in show order and making that a linear timeline, it makes it easier to track which episode is next and to not deal with criss-cross season shenanigans, if there's a temporal inconsistency like Tanks For The Memories being after the Hearthswarming episode, I'll try and make reasons to fix it...
then again, Rainbow said it was there first winter together. I could easily make an excuse that Rainbow had left him home for the winter of the Hearthswarming episode while she was in Canterlot and didn't realize Tank was hibernating when she came back, and probably wouldn't know since she doesn't wake up animals during Winter Wrap-Up.
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Makes sense to me.
The anthro thing still seems entirely out of nowhere. Not only that, but you need to quit rushing so much. This feels less like a story at this point and more like a list. "First this thing happened then this happened now I'm doing this." You're doing a bunch of telling and absolutely zero showing. Also, please quit talking to the readers; it's bad enough that the last few chapters read more like a list than an actual story, but at this point I feel more like I'm reading a chatlog or forum post.
I think you need to slow down by a lot and go back to the pacing of earlier chapters where you included more details, showed more instead of telling, and actually treated it like a story. As it stands, the quality is dropping massively.
1) I am disappointed that we didn't get to actually see the slumber party
2) I understand the anthro thing, but (personal opinion) I think that it might have been better without it. But having hands is nice, so... eh.
3) 9691765 what this guy said.
4) It is your story so write it as you wish and don't let what anyone says deter you from continuing.
5) Have a nice day/night/afternoon
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wow, I never heard an explanation for that before but that sounds perfect.
also, I thought it was weird to have anthro and normal ponies together, but the movie showed that normal and anthro griffins are both a thing so it actually makes sense in the show.
I'm absolutely loving this
Not gonna lie, I fully expected you/Fluttershy/Ark to follow this up with "I'm certainly planning to" or something along those lines.
.....doesn’t Britain use the imperial system?
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I don't know, but for the entirety of my education, even up to college, I had only been taught to use the Metric System, only time I heard of inches, yards and such was from the internet
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No, the British invented that system but had the good sense to abandon it
IDK when, sometime post WWII I think
The USA is the only Developed Country to still use the old system
The same with grand juries. They invented them but had the good sense to abandon them as obsolete
Amazing chapter To bad we missed Fluttershy make Gilda 'sing'
*Blinks* that little fourth wall rant was very unexpected...
If you using metric system you should know that a nipple few centimeters long is fucking LONG. Well, considering species her antro form is based on her tits are actually udders... and were udders before the transformation as well. So, it fits, I guess.
Everyone: But can she cut dimonds with em?
Fluttershy x Gilda in Friends with benefits