After beating the Wondercolts fair and square, the Shadowbolts Sour Sweet, Sugarcoat, Lemon Zest, Sunny Flare, and Indigo Zap get the geodes of Fluttershy, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash, leaving those five powerless. Now, with the Shadowbolts newly discovered abilities of pyrokinesis, cryokinesis, sonikinesis, technopathy, and electrokinesis, they plan on giving their former headmistress their own brand of justice. Can Sunset, Twilight, and the powerless main 5 stop them, or will the Shadowbolts get the upper hand and kill Abucus Cinch and continue to use their powers for evil?
Chapters (1)
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Way too short and rushed and Fluttershy a hypcrite!
She conveintly forgot all the times theyr eminded Sunset of ehr mistakes and say No Offense!
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That was pretty weird...
Like diablo4000 said, it was very short and thus, very rushed. Which is a shame because the concept could have become a whole story with multiple chapters and I would have loved to read that.
But I actually liked it! It's weird in a good way.
I could have done without the drama though. It clashed with the obvious comedic, not so serious tone.
And it could use a clear line break, some ... or a horisontal line to signify when there's jumps in time. It'll be easer to read that way.
I wonder what would actually happen if someone else put the geodes on?
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I feel like both fluttershy and sunset were hypocrites.