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Twilight Sparkle comes across an old mare in Ponyville, that possess many magical objects. She sees a large black stone and is mystified by it. She could use a part of the stone to help Rarity finish a dress, so she steals a part of the stone from the mare. Ironically Rarity finished the dress, so she makes a necklace out the the stone for her friend. Twilight loves it, and she wants to know how she looks with it and her Element tiara on her. She puts them both on and falls into a coma. Upon waking from her coma she gets a letter from Celestia asking to visit her in Canterlot.

Upon arrival in Canterlot, Twilight notices much has changed since the royal wedding. Canterlot has several new districts and more guards. Then she learns about the military group protecting the city is on high alert due to a fear of an attack from the southern kingdom of Azmos. General Amani, the stallion in charge of the Canterlot military, seeks to change the order of the who rules.

Lastly a newly appointed Archangel known as Magus, insisting that the heavens should do what they can to find the stone that contains all the Evils and destroy it once and for all. Most of the Archangels have given up the search for the stone, as they believe its is dead. Magus goes off to find it on his own. On his arrival in Equestira, he gets far more than he ever expected.

A great evil approaches Equestira.

(My first Fic, so constructive criticism would be very helpful)

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