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Cool he got new clothing and now there is cake nice
There was "cake".
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sry, I couldn't resist.... not really sry.
The cake is a lie.
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Is it? Just walk through the door.
Btw: I wonder what other references you can spot.
Like it so far, looking forward to more.
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...I just found the 'nightmode'.
I'ma use the hell out of it.
Edit: for some reason the 'feed' didn't notify me of the 'night mode' post being, well... posted. So I assumed, that this function was here for a while and I simply never noticed it like a dunce.
Not gonna bother to read this since it's another displaced fic (oh boy so original). Just gonna downvote and move on.
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If you're not going to even read it... then why downvote it? Just be on your way, without downvoting it. It's simple.
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I downvoted it because of the idea behind. You are using the displaced format which is one of the worst things you can use on the sight.
Second if I read the story I already know that I won't feel attached to the characters at all since the displaced premise will be at the back of my mind to remind me that you refused to make something original. I imagine the main character is edgey and probably hates everything OR they take on the persona of who they became which then just asks what the hell was the point of the character?
TLDR. use an original story premise that is absolute cringe and you won't get down voted. Simple.
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Well... if you would have actually read the story, you'd realize, that the main character wasn't technically displaced. At least not by the merchant.
You say that, but have you read the Diaries of a Madman? Or Bad Mondays? Or any similar stories? The characters in them were displaced as well, weren't they? Are they bad stories, because of it? Not really, no.
This story wasn't inspired, by other displaced stories though. This came to me, long before I even knew of the displaced.
I think you missed a 'not', but I get what you're saying. And TLDR? Really? War and Peace is TLDR, but I suppose you have festivities currently going on.
In all honesty? Some displaced stories make me cringe as well, but! Displaced is just like fantasy or sci-fi. Are they used a lot? Yes. Are they getting boring? No. Are some sci-fi, fantasy or any other genre have shit stories in them? Absolutely. Does this mean, that all of them are? Absolutely not.
So while, I understand: why you think this story deserves a downvote. I don't understand why you would downvote it, without even giving it a read. You can't criticize something, without experiencing it. Otherwise: it's just not criticism.
Happy oncoming New Year. Bitch.
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Fine if it will stop your crying I'll read it. Also if you're gonna try to rise above someone then you shouldn't end your post with bitch. I haven't cursed at you so can we keep that out of it?
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Who said a bitch can't be polite? Was it you, who decided to downvote my comment? I also never said, that I want you to read it, plus I can't physically cry so... yeah. Anyway! I think that we can both agree on not needing to stretch this out any longer, yes?
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Good Lord!!! What a chapter!! Cant wait for more!!
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You wanted me to read it before voting on it also I removed my rating before. So when I do get done reading it then I'll rate it. But if you just don't want me to read it then that just says you know it's another cringey displaced fic. Also fyi the character doesn't need to be displaced by the merchant you still have the merchant and the con idea in there so still that's unoriginal.
I seriously want you to tell me why you wanted to make a displaced fic. You have so many better options then the cringey displaced genre so why go with it when you know most people aren't gonna bother to read it because of that. So again why?
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Well... the Idea just sort of came to me at the time. But when I found out about displaced fic I postponed my story for a few years.
I know, that there are many other good genres, but I'm not really going for reads. I want to tell a story. And I am doing just that.
I'm not planning to make this like every other displaced story, and I know, that some people will not like it purely because they consider it a displaced story. I just... don't like it, when someone says it's horrible, without even trying it out. And then tells it almost to my face.
Plus: I felt like I should start with a 'displaced' story. I'm not just going to write displaced stories all the time though. It's a story. That simply involved displacement.
The genre may not be original, but like I implied earlier: it's not the genre, that defines the storyline. Well... it technically is, but it's mostly the story itself. Or the author, if you prefer.
I'll just say this: take your time. I'm in no rush and I don't force anyone to read my stories. People should have to read them at their own pace.
Otherwise: what's the point? It's no longer an immersive story.
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Fine with me dude I do understand and if you can actually make a displaced story work then more power to you. I'll start reading it soon.
Maybe you should have mentioned or described it in one of the prior chapters? It would have helped picture a building friendship. Maybe some bonding with Sonata while washing the dishes and so on.
I honestly am a tad disappointed that he didn't use one of those lines!
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If you think its hard doing writing without energy of any kind, try doing it sick...
The humans’ natural, jealthy teeth color is a a slightly yellowish brown, not pearly white
Though it doesnt look that good
...Remember kids, calling Asians great at literally everything is both a compliment and extremely racist
Isn't that nice?
What's with the huge wash of stories with characters that think they're somehow protecting themselves by witholding their name? I mean if you're in a Dresden-verse where your name spoken from your own lips gives others power over you that's one thing, otherwise it's just a stupid psychological pitfall to make you feel as if you aren't as vulnerable as you are. And one that doesn't even work well.
People don't give a fuck about your name unless they can use it to research you.