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This is getting good!! I cant wait for Vadon to meet the Princesses. I wonder how they will react to his magic??
Also, will he fuck them?
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Did- DID YOU ALREADY READ IT!? WTF?!
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Yeah. I'm a fast reader
So, can you answer my question?
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20 thousand words... in less than ten minutes?
As for your question: it is... a possibility. Multiple realities get mixed up, but I only got one. I write as I read.
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Yeah, again. I'm a fast reader.
Very happy to see a new chapter! It was an exciting one for sure!
That as amazing I'm liking rusty he swears yay swearing it's fun
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Thank you. It gets more descriptive in chapter 6-8 and further on.
delete the colon
delete colon after says, delete comma after dick
there's this thing called Grammarly I use for minor grammar mistakes but even that thing doesn't fix some of this.
Try not using a colon at all unless:
it's a list like this
or to state something like this:
try using the colon like their limited.
hmmm, I wonder how big the explosion range is. I get the feeling that will come back into play and save there ass's.
Also, I wonder what he can do with necromancy? We've seen him bring one back from the dead without him looking like he died. I wonder if he can summon ghosts or other things to help him out. It would be poetic to see the mermaids get killed and/or detained by there victims ghosts and/or corpses.
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He didn't. But he prefers girl/woman.
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Right... unless they all faded into energy...
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They shall NOT fade into the force. They aren't Jedi or Sith.
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...This will be explained later on.
Do i really need to explain?
By the way the grammar shot up by five levels good job
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Cheers.
So is the sex in the story clop levels or is it something tame that I might actually enjoy?
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The sex tag is there for innuendos, mentions and maybe someone accidentally gets a glimpse.
Lets just say: Vadon has better things to do, than have sex.
Nice story, nerd MOAAAR!!!!
So far I’ll admit that this has been an interesting story and I’m enjoying it greatly, so good on ya!
(For making an interesting story)
By the way, how does a story get featured?
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I dunno. I just posted ch 8 and it sent me to the main page, where this story was the last on the list. For about 2 seconds.
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Hmm... fascinating
Well anyway thanks for the response!
Well, somehow the style seems worse than before.....
Buuuuut, screw it. Its a Damn good story besides that.